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I admire your creativity

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Strong recommendations

"This is a rather serious topic. Unfortunately, there are more people who can relate than those who cannot. I would like to congratulate you on making this story in order to help raise people’s awareness about the importance of understanding depression and being there for the people who are going through it. Your story is very informative and it carries a strong message. Words really do hurt, as you say it yourself. The outcome for Annielese is pretty unfortunate, but I understand why you had to write it this way. I would suggest that you do further editing, so that your story gets through to people more easily and that they take it more seriously. And I have a question. “Emotionally, I’m done. Mentally, I’m drained. Spiritually, I’m dead.” – I read this a lot online. Is it originally yours?"

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