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❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

"I’m happy Isla and Julian finally are happy and are together but what a turd of a father she had 🤦🏽‍♀️ he was all about himself but I’m so happy the truth finally revealed. Thank you "

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Couldn't put it down!

"Such a amazing emotional ride with great characters! This is definitely going on my 'Must Read' list! I loved the journey of the FMC, fighting for what she wants from life and not going along with the plans her father made for her. The author really let's you into her characters' minds with beautifully written descriptions and feelings. The only feedback I'd give to the author is right around ch32 the plot had a bit of a hole and later there is some repetitiveness, but still 100% readable!"

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Awesome

"Loved the plot and the characters too. I think every girl needs a Julian in her life 🥹 thank you for writing this story"

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Forbidden love

"This is erotic, thrilling, suspensful and I love it!"

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