What is your opinion?
A present day King Arthur story?
"I almost think that this should be in the new thriller contest, because this story really kept me on my toes. I loved your writing style. It immediately sucked me into the plot and had me rooting for your protagonist. I also found the King Arthur twist very interesting, but I want to know more about how it fits in. The smoke from the mens' mouths...were they really demons? Dragons? A good story makes you think, and this one certainly does. I hope that you will add more. Also, awesome ending. Loved it. Good luck in the contest!"
Great Chase!
"Man, that was a fun read, albeit tense. Good pacing, good plot - you did a great job of keeping the tension going throughout the run. On the technical side, I found a typo in the sentence "I used to think that was all bullshit" - you put "use" instead of "used." There might have been others, but I can't recall them because the story kept me pretty well engaged. Good luck in the contest! If you have the time, I'd love for you to read my entry: http://www.inkitt.com/stories/19062."
