Done Waiting Book 4: a.k.a. Elise

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Summary

Elise and Renault — rival master thieves — have spent a year playing the most exquisite game across Saint-Éloi’s rooftops and vaults. Stealing each other’s scores, erasing each other’s traces, leaving silk gloves and hairpins like coded calling cards only the other can read. To the city, they’re l’Audacieuse and l’Ombre — dashing legends trading clever blows in the papers. In reality, they’ve never spoken, never touched, never even seen each other’s faces. Only masks. Only shadows. Only the electric ache of wanting someone who moves exactly like you do. Until the most impossible job forces them into the same vault at the same moment. Alarms ticking. Lasers humming. Bodies pressed close to avoid detection. One whispered check-in becomes two, then a breath against skin, then everything they’ve waited a year to say — and do. Book 4 in the Done Waiting series — standalone slow-burn rivals-to-lovers caper with late-night tension, earned heat, and quiet hope. No cliffhangers. Full explicit payoff. Mature content — adults only.

Status
Complete
Chapters
7
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One: The Clean Lift

The service door spits me out into the loading dock at one-forty-one a.m., backpack slung low between my shoulder blades, the Étoile de Saint-Éloi a cool, satisfying weight against my spine. The sapphire pendant is wrapped in black velvet inside a padded pouch — small enough to disappear under a sweater if I need to, heavy enough to remind me every step that tonight was clean. No alarms tripped. No cameras looped. Just eight seconds on the lock, a quick vault over the inner railing, and the quiet click of the case opening like it was waiting for me.

I keep my pace unhurried — long strides, shoulders relaxed, the way you move when you belong even when you don’t. The dark scarlet silk veil is still draped across my eyes, thin enough that I can see through it in low light, thick enough to hide the color and shape of my gaze. It brushes my cheekbones with every step, cool and slippery against my skin, carrying the faint scent of my own perfume — jasmine and vetiver — that clings to the fabric after hours of wear. The dark brown wig falls in loose waves past my shoulders, heavier than my natural hair, shifting with each movement so that strands catch the dock’s sodium glow and gleam like polished chestnut. Both are part of the act: not just disguise, but mystique. They make people remember the veil, the hair, the smile — never the eyes that actually saw them.

The dock still smells of diesel and yesterday’s coffee grounds, the air cooler here than on the roof, damp against my neck where sweat has started to dry. My quads burn pleasantly from the drop I took to clear the last motion sensor; my core is still braced, holding the memory of every controlled breath.

Then the flashlight beam cuts across the concrete.

“Stop right there.”

The guard is young — mid-twenties, uniform crisp, hand already on his radio. He’s tall, broad through the shoulders, the kind of build that says he spends more time in the gym than on actual patrols. His light shakes just enough to tell me he’s nervous. Good. Nervous is useful.

I stop. Turn slowly. Let my hands stay loose at my sides — palms open, no threat. The backpack hangs innocent behind me. I tilt my head so the veil catches the beam, turning scarlet to deep wine in the harsh light, hiding my eyes while letting the curve of my mouth show.

“Oh, darling,” I say, voice sliding into that higher, lilting register l’Audacieuse wears like a second skin. “You caught me.”

His thumb hovers over the radio button. “Hands where I can see them. Now.”

I raise them slowly — theatrical, palms out — and take one small step closer. The light wavers across my chest, catches the open collar of my black long-sleeve, the faint sheen of sweat at my collarbones. The veil shifts slightly with the movement, silk whispering against my skin. I let him look. Let his eyes drop for the fraction of a second they always do — first to the veil that hides half my face, then lower, following the line of my throat, the open collar, the subtle rise of my breasts under the fitted shirt.

“I’ve heard of you,” he says, voice cracking just a little on the last word. “l’Audacieuse. You never hurt anyone.”

I let the smile widen — bright, delighted — the veil making it mysterious rather than full. “That’s right, mon cher. Never.”

He swallows. The radio crackles faintly — someone checking in from the other side of the building. He glances toward the sound. Mistake.

I move.

Three quick steps — gymnast grace, silent — close the distance. My left hand catches his wrist, twists just enough to pin the radio away from his mouth. My right hand presses flat to his chest — not hard, just firm — over his heart. I feel it hammering under my palm, fast and uneven.

“Easy,” I whisper, voice dropping the lilt, going low and real for half a breath before sliding back into character. “Breathe. I’m not here to hurt you. I’m not here to bargain with anything more than words.”

His eyes are wide. Pupils blown. Not fear — not entirely. The light from his flashlight is pointed uselessly at the ceiling now, painting us both in harsh upward glow. The scarlet veil glows faintly in the spill, silk shifting with every breath I take.

“You — you’re really her,” he manages. “The one who takes things that are too beautiful to stay locked up.”

I laugh — soft, surprised, the sound muffled slightly by the veil. “Is that what they say?”

He nods — jerky — like he’s afraid to break the spell. “They say the pieces you take... they’re always the ones that look like they belong somewhere else. Like they were begging to be free.”

I tilt my head, studying him through the thin scarlet film. His heart is still racing under my palm — a steady, frantic drum. I ease the pressure just a fraction. Not enough to let go. Just enough to let him breathe.

“Pretty way to put it,” I murmur. “But you’re not wrong. Some things are so enticing you can’t help yourself. The way they catch the light, the way they sit there waiting for someone to notice how perfect they are. You feel that pull, don’t you, Tomas?”

He swallows again. His free hand twitches toward his belt, but doesn’t move. “Sometimes,” he admits, voice barely above a whisper. “When I’m on night shift. Looking at the cases. Wondering what it would feel like to just... take one.”

I smile — small, real this time, not the bright performance version. The veil hides most of it, but he still sees the curve of my mouth soften. “See? We’re not so different.”

A long beat. His breathing is loud in the quiet. Mine is steady — controlled — the way it always is when I’m this close to the edge.

“Tell you what,” I say softly. “You pretend you didn’t see me tonight, and I’ll pretend I didn’t see how long it took your thumb to find that radio button. No tricks. No promises. Just two people who understand the pull. Deal?”

His Adam’s apple bobs. “I — I have to — ”

I press my palm a fraction harder against his chest. Feel the rapid thud under my fingers. “You don’t have to do anything you don’t want to. And right now...” I pull back just enough to meet his eyes again, letting my own soften with mock sympathy behind the veil. “Right now, I think you want to let me walk away.”

Another beat. His eyes flick to the backpack slung over my shoulder — then back to the scarlet silk that hides half my face.

“...Go,” he says finally. Quiet. Resigned. But not angry.

I step back. Release his wrist. Give him a tiny, playful salute with two fingers — the veil shifting with the motion, silk whispering against my cheekbones.

“Merci, Tomas. You’re a gentleman.”

I turn. Walk. Don’t run. Don’t look back.

The alley swallows me two corners later. I let the backpack settle more comfortably against my spine, feel the sapphire shift inside like it’s pleased with itself. My pulse is still elevated — not from fear, from the rush of control, from the way his eyes followed the veil, the wig, the smile, never quite landing on the woman underneath.

A successful performance is exhilarating. Always is. The adrenaline still hums under my skin, sharp and bright, pooling low in my belly the way it always does when the job lands clean and the audience is left dazed. My body is alive with it — skin tingling, breath quick, the faint dampness between my thighs from moving hard and fast and perfectly. I could go home right now, strip down, and let my fingers chase that high until it breaks. Easy. Satisfying.

But my mind keeps sliding sideways — back to last night, the Galerie Rivage, the empty case and the handprint still fogged on the glass. Big. Bold. Deliberate. The way my gloved fingertip hovered over it, close enough to imagine the heat that had been there. The way my pulse kicked when I realized he’d left it for me.

I chide myself — quiet, dry, the inner voice that never lets me get away with anything. Really, Elise? You’re standing in an alley after a flawless lift, body still buzzing from the high, and your first thought is a man’s hands on glass? Pathetic. You just disarmed a guard with a smile and a whisper, and now you’re mooning over a palm print like some lovesick art student. Get a grip.

Except the ache doesn’t fade. It’s not just the post-heist heat. It’s deeper — a restless tug under my ribs that has nothing to do with the sapphire in my pack and everything to do with the man who left that mark. The one who’s been matching me move for move for months, never rushing, never sloppy, always waiting for the perfect moment. The one whose footage I steal when the servers are quiet — slipping in after hours, downloading the relevant angles, wiping the originals clean, just as he’s been doing to mine.

The tapes around the buildings I’ve worked have been disappearing for weeks. Not damaged, not overwritten. Just gone. Cleanly erased or pulled before the police ever see them. I know because I’ve done the same to his jobs: copied the clips I wanted — the ones that show his hands steady on a tension wrench, the way his left holds pressure while the right teases the last stubborn pin home, meditative, almost tender; the vault over a twelve-foot gap where his body extended mid-air, arms slicing forward for balance, landing in a crouch that absorbed impact without a sound; the nine-minute wait in a blind spot while a guard swept past twice, breathing slow and even, eyes tracking the pattern like he’d already mapped it in his head. I’ve paused those moments too many times, watching the flex of his forearms, the patience in his stance, the way he moves like silence is something he owns.

Professional courtesy. Mutual admiration. Neither of us wants the other’s face on a wanted poster. Neither of us wants the game to end because some detective got lucky with a frame grab.

I smile — small, wry — at the thought. We’re both thieves, after all. And thieves know better than to leave evidence of the other behind. We’re smart enough to figure out each other’s names, but “l’Audacieuse,” and “l’Ombre?” The ‘daring one’ and the ‘shadow’ — ridiculous, flamboyantly thrilling for the city — and probably for both of us too. Everyone loves a pimpernel.

Back on my own roof now, I peel off the veil first — scarlet silk sliding over my cheekbones, cool and slippery, leaving my face bare to the wind. The dark brown wig comes next; I tug it free, shake out my real hair, feel the lighter strands settle against my neck. My scalp tingles from the hours of confinement. I don’t smooth anything down. Don’t care if it looks messy. He’s already seen worse on the feeds — me vaulting a railing in the rain, breath ragged, thighs burning, still perfect on the dismount. He didn’t look away then. He’s not going to look away now.

I sit on the parapet again, legs dangling, city glittering below like it doesn’t know two people just left traces for each other in the dark.

My pulse is still loud. Not from the job. Not from Tomas. From the handprint I found last night. From the way I’ve been replaying it in my head ever since — tracing the outline in my mind, feeling the size of it, the boldness, the quiet certainty that he left it for me.

I know what I bring to the table. Lithe, strong where it counts — core that holds a plank for three minutes without shaking, thighs that clamp like a vice when I need them to, shoulders that carry my own weight up a drainpipe hand-over-hand. I know men notice. Bartenders remember my drink order with a little too much warmth. Security guards hesitate half a second longer than protocol when I smile. Strangers glance twice when I walk past in civilian clothes. I register it clinically, like reading a security camera’s blind spot. Useful data. Occasionally flattering. Never surprising.

But Renault isn’t looking at the distraction version of me. He’s looking at the work. The clean lines when I move without an audience. The precision when no one’s watching. The way I laugh — real laugh — when I beat my own time on a climb.

And that... that makes the loneliness sharper. Not because I think I’m unlovable. Because the only person who’s ever seen the real work is still a shadow I haven’t touched.

I exhale. Long. Slow.

The city keeps glittering. Indifferent. Alive.

Somewhere out there, he’s finding my hairpin. Tracing the same ghost of warmth on glass that I traced on his print.

I smile — small, wry, satisfied — into the dark.

Game on, Shadow.

I’m done pretending I don’t want to play for real.

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