Memories in the Sunshine

JyotiRekha: Great plot Describe the life of orcos moe

Hester: Very good, was short too the point , not lingering on the abuse, pity you didn’t let him step in earlier knowing the abuse was happening, but this is almost real for some women who have gone through it, just wish they could all have a princess at te end of thete tunnel

Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask

vj218: HelloI just finished reading your recent plot. You have such a great way of telling a story that you really get lost in it and genuinely enjoy reading. By the way when do you think you’ll post your next plot?

Shriya: It's a beautiful story with strong characters and a great story line. It's emotionally very engaging from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this.

Laura: A lighthearted and entertaining story. Well done! 🩷

Teresa: The book is well done, brilliant in fact! Z

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

Pandas : I like the plot writing twist and most importantly lysa/lyra's character what i didn't loke was tbat they were notp telling amara what was actually wrong with riven