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His butterfly

"I am absolutely in love with this book"

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Excruciating

"Out of hundreds of novels read before, this one is my favorite novel with one of my favorite male leads. Each chapter taught a new meaning of love. Beautiful story and a very different ending. A very heart-touching story with a very heart-aching ending that left me in tears. But I like the lesson taught that Life Doesn't Stop For Anyone Or With Anyone you have to move on, you have to live it, not for anyone but for yourself."

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Beautiful, but...

"Beautiful. I have found it very interesting. I read quite a lot on Inkitt and I think a guy might have stolen ideas from you. I'm talking about the first chapter of "My meaningful, dead end lifetime quest." Check it out for yourself!"

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His butterfly

"Asdfghjkl I am so sad rn I can't believe he died I did not expect this at all 😖😖😭"

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Aneska

"Jaxon....love you "

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Im emotional rn

"Im sobbing"

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His Butterfly

"A really nice story :) Normally I would have demanded a sequel (mainly, because the ending was so abrupt) but the last chapter tied it all so nicely that I have no complaints :) "

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His butterfly

"I loved the fact that the ending was unexpected and I love the way you had us going through the motions. I would really recommend this book to anyone. I think that also this book has a message for ppl that go through hard times and don’t know what to do or think that their life is over. Thank youu soo much for letting me be part of this wonderful journey I enjoyed it soo much, and I hope good things come your way always ! 💜 "

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His butterfly

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His Butterfly

"👍The plot was superb! You are an amazing 📝writer. I didn't pay much attention to the grammar aspect but you nailed perfection there on my path🥳. I wish I could write my stories as you do. With confidence. But... How could you break my heart like that?!?!? I had a bad day and then I'm on the 26th chapter and the mc guy (Jaxon) gets shot. I thought that maybe he would you know me okay and like maybe wake up a few days after being in a coma, 😬but then all of a sudden I read the last chapter and started bawling😭 my eyes out. I cried a lot for them. And Though the ending made me 😢cry this was a great book with a lovely message to ”LET GO AND MOVE ON... BUT HOLD CLOSE AND HOLD ON... ALL THE BEAUTIFUL MEMORIES!!!”🥰I loved it!😻"

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Good Job

"I enjoyed getting to know the characters and the plot seems well thought out. The way it is written really makes me feel what the characters are feeling. Well Done! "

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His Butterfly

"My heart has been completely shattered... This is my first book on inkit and the guy dies.... I'm literally just sobbing right now... Why why whyyyyyy😭😭😭 The storyline is really good though.... It took me 3 hours to read and I absolutely love it.... I still can't believe Jax dies "

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his butterfly

"this book is amazing, for the most part this book can be like any other but if you wait and read you will realize that its not. Endings are ending the thing about endings is not that they aren't happy its just some endings aren't happy in others eyes. This book will send you through a roller coaster ride of emotion so if you read be prepared."

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Cry Me a River

"Omg it's very sad. I will just cry rn. But overall it's a great book, even if I'm not a fan of angst myself. Very recommended"

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heart touching

"this story is so romantic and funny........brought lots of tears to my eyes happy and sad.the writing is splendid and certainly didn't expect the twist...absolutely in love with the book and its characters"

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His Butterfly

"This left me in tears, Everyone in my class is staring at me because I'm crying! This Is the perfect love story, and I absolutely love it!! It's a Must read for any Romance lover!! I give it Five stares in every category!!!! Please write more books like this one!!!"

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Amazing!

"The very beginning of the story is thrilling and engaging. I have to commend your style of writing. You sort of eased me into the story, and before I realized what was happening, I was completely taken in, enthusiastic and impatient about what is going to happen next. I could understand the struggle Brooklyn was going through and I felt for her. I also comprehend Jax’s point of view after being shot and his thoughts on death. As he himself says, although this seemed like an unhappy ending, it was everything but that. They got what they wanted, they are happy and they would not change a thing. And neither would I about this story. Well done!"

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His Butterfly

"I loved the plot of the story the character development and how the story unfolded piece by piece and where there would be cliche bits there were things you wouldn't expect. The grammar and punctuation were off some parts but didn't affect the overall novel. The ending made me cry because I really didn't want anyone to die but it was a wholesome and beautiful ending that reflects how life actually is. I would recommend this book to ALL of my friends seeing as they would really enjoy this type of book. I rated the book according to what I saw throughout the story what i liked and so on. It is a beautiful story."

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