The Obelisk

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Summary

Trapped in a buried Saharan temple, seven archaeologists must navigate a room of impossible geometry and a mysterious obelisk, where time, space, and reality itself conspire to make them disappear.

Status
Complete
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The room with the obelisk

We have made many discoveries, some in places once thought unreachable. This one, however, was found in a location we never believed possible. That changed when we began examining LIDAR data.


Beneath kilometers of Sahara sand, the scans revealed shapes that could not be natural, angles too precise, voids too deliberate. Structures.


Securing funding and permission took years. Even then, only a small team was approved to excavate the site. What began as wonder has since become something else entirely. I have participated in difficult digs before, but nothing compares to this. My outlook has changed in ways I struggle to explain.


I do not believe this journal will ever be found. But if it is, if you are reading this, then follow my account carefully. Perhaps you will succeed where we failed. Perhaps you will find a way out.


After hundreds of hours of excavation, we uncovered a buried temple. Its entrance was intact, sealed beneath the sand as if deliberately hidden rather than lost to time. We contracted a drone specialist to survey the interior before any of us entered. Even then, the precautions felt insufficient.


It had been centuries, perhaps longer, since anyone had set foot inside. Where this place once may have teemed with life, it now stood as a forgotten sacred ground, preserved by silence and pressure. The hieroglyphs surrounding the structure were unlike any we had cataloged before. They did not record history or worship. They warned.


There is something wrong with this temple. Something anomalous. I hesitate to call it cursed or haunted, but no other words come close.


If you are reading this, know this above all else. I pray no rescue party was sent for us. To come here now would be to share our fate.


We were granted special permission to enter the deepest chamber. There were seven of us, doctors and researchers from across the world, each specializing in a different discipline of archaeology. None of us understood what we were truly stepping into.


Before proceeding further, I feel it necessary to record the members of our excavation. Should this journal be found, their names deserve to be preserved, even if the work itself is forgotten.


Dr. Samir El Masri


Lead archaeologist. Egyptian. Specialist in pre dynastic and transitional sites. Samir has spent most of his career investigating locations dismissed as anomalies. He believes history does not erase its mistakes, only buries them. This site was his initiative.


Dr. Leyla Aksoy


Structural historian. Turkish. Expert in ancient load bearing architecture and pre Hellenic construction methods. Leyla was the first to note that the temple had been built inward rather than outward. She studies how ancient cultures constructed against perceived threats rather than environmental necessity.


Dr. Eleanor Price


Cultural anthropologist. British. Her work focuses on ritual spaces and taboo architecture. Eleanor has spent decades studying why civilizations sealed certain locations rather than destroying them. She joined the team reluctantly, having warned that some structures are meant to remain closed.


Amira Hassan


Graduate epigrapher. Egyptian. Specialized in transitional scripts and funerary warnings. This was Amira's first major field excavation. She demonstrated an exceptional sensitivity to the hieroglyphs surrounding the temple and repeatedly cautioned against entering the unmarked chamber.


Kemal Yılmaz


Field engineer. Turkish. Oversaw excavation equipment and reinforcement. Kemal has worked extensively in disaster recovery and collapse zones. He believes most problems can be resolved through structural intervention and physical effort.


Jonah Clarke


Drone specialist and documentation. American. Responsible for aerial mapping and interior reconnaissance. Jonah was the youngest member of the team. He observed more than he spoke and recorded everything without commentary.


And then myself,


Thomas Reed


Logistics and survey lead. American. Former Marine, logistics division in a former life. Now working in excavations. Responsible for mapping, distance measurement, and structural safety. I have always approached archaeology as a problem of scale and precision. If something can be measured, I believe it could be navigated.


There were seven of us when we entered the temple. The entourage of assistants and additional support remained above, waiting for our return.


After our initial entry into the deeper parts of the temple, we began surveying and studying all aspects of the structure. Near the end of our survey, Kemal moved ahead to assess potential hazards. Not long after, we found his bag outside the last room.


The room containing the obelisk was the only one we had not yet investigated. Its entrance had been sealed by some form of ancient barricade, deliberately constructed and clearly intentional. We knew Kemal had been carefully dismantling small sections to ensure the safest possible approach into the final chamber, located at the bottom and exact center of the temple.


After a full day's worth of research, Kemal reported that from what he could see at a distance, the remaining space appeared to be a simple room and posed no immediate threat of collapse if he continued removing the barricade. We gave our blessing, and he proceeded.


At one point, we sent the drone inside to check for any unexpected dangers. We were on a fortunate streak of minimal incidents. Jonah and Kemal checked for radiation and any potential gases in the chamber. The readings were clean. The only anomaly was a noticeable drop in temperature.


Kemal had Jonah pack up the drone while he went in to conduct a final investigation. His bag remained at the doorway.


The chamber was tall and square, with an immense obelisk at its center. There were no signs of writing or markings at the entrance.


Jonah later claimed he had called out to Kemal, but when no response came, he assumed Kemal had returned to the surface to retrieve tools or discuss his findings with the rest of us, anywhere but inside that room. Jonah eventually found us while searching for him.


Dr. Masri suggested we search the interior first before checking above. Perhaps Kemal had gone up for refreshments or equipment. He was not there. None of the surface team had seen him return. His tent was untouched for the day.


I went back down and organized a search with the six of us already below. Eventually, we reached the final chamber. I had been fortunate enough to bring a few canteens, thinking we would be parched by that point. It was a good decision, if only temporarily.


We stood before the obelisk. It was black and cold to the touch, massive in scale, perhaps half the size of the obelisk at the U.S. Capitol. Unlike that monument, this one was perfectly round, lacking edges or corners, like a colossal pillar. Its top appeared pointed, but it rose too high for our lights to reach.


As we searched the chamber, we lost sight of Dr. Masri.


Up until that moment, we had been careful to remain within visual contact of one another. It was an unspoken rule, one we believed essential to our survival. We halted immediately, scanning the floor for signs of pressure plates or concealed mechanisms. I tested the ground with our equipment, searching for weighted trap doors or structural inconsistencies. I found nothing.


It was then we realized the entrance was gone.


There was no collapse, no sound, no trace of stone or debris. It simply was not there.


This place, the obelisk, it is not a room in any conventional sense. It is a liminal space. We debated possibilities until exhaustion set in. Were we trapped in time. Experiencing some form of collective psychosis. A reaction to an unknown airborne agent. With no exit and no Masri, we took inventory of what we knew and what we had.


Dr. Price assumed leadership of the findings. We rationed our remaining water and a small supply of food. We continued to document everything, attempting to form rational hypotheses, but nothing here behaves rationally. The geometry shifts. Distances lie. Time feels inconsistent.


It has been one day since Masri vanished. I will record what we find tomorrow.