What is your opinion?
Fast-paced and intense!
"This story REALLY keeps you hooked from beginning to end. The action and suspense never stops. And that ending! I need more! This is going to drive me crazy until I know what happens next! Well done, there. I loved the character of the necromancer. It was really chilling. The whole idea of it was super scary, and you certainly didn't beat around the bush there. It made me sad that so many people died. I feel like this story is very affecting. I really hope that there is more to come, because this very well done. I almost though - reading through this - that you could expand that one part into several chapters if you chose to. Either way, it's great. Please let me know if you add more to it. Great work!"
The great escape
"Excellent story. I love the main story line and all the sub-plots. The story with the prince seemed to start out slowly, but the twist of the man with the undead followers really caught my attention. Creepy and intriguing. I really am interested in seeing where the connection to dreams comes in. It is a great start and I can't wait to see where it goes from here."
More! (Please?)
"I really really liked this. How she went from such an abusive situation to running from a crazed necromancer of sorts (His 'Wanna see trick?' line made him seem deranged or crazy, but I guess having a whole undead army would make him either of those, too...) It was like like out of the fire into the frying pan. I would love to read more - and I would like to see more details - I had difficulty understanding her surroundings. But I suppose when you're running from a horde of zombies you're not noticing all that much. In short - I loved it! Awesome stuff and I would love to learn more about everything."
Fast paced horror fantasy
"I love how quickly the tone of this story shifts from a scene from Game of Thrones to The Walking Dead. Your story kept me interested from beginning to end. I thought the masked villain was creepy and I want to know more about his evil deeds. I would be interested to see where this story goes from here. Well done!"
