What is your opinion?
Unbroken
"This story starts out tragic. To see someone who has such potential have it ripped away from them because of the violence and hateful act of another is so sad. Amber is a likable character and her ability to push through the terrible circumstances she is dealt is encouraging. I am interested to see where the story is headed, and whether she will get a happy ending."
Unbroken
"'Unbroken' is a story of a young girl who faces all odds in life from the time she is born. Her alcoholic mother who leaves her behind to be cared for by her grandmother, the gang rape which makes her pregnant and the fact that she couldn't bring Jasper, the rapist, to justice makes her a heart broken person. But her son, Jordan gives her some hope to live on. Their moving to Vegas give us some hope to be optimistic. As the story is still in its 4th chapter, I couldn't rate the story well. The plot is yet to be delivered but I loved her writing style and the flow she gave. I'm not sure I came across the name of the protagonist, If not, then perhaps her name should appear earlier on. I look forward to reading more of the story and do keep on writing."
Interesting Story
"This is obviously a very heartfelt and touching story. The writing flowed easily but I think there could have been more dialogue to lengthen the experiences as it is very fast paced and seems to be more a recounting than a novel. I see this is a work in progress so I look forward to it's completion."
