Sateria and the Night Raiders
It pulled me in right away, I wanted to know how the relationship between Sateria and Johnny was going to develop. She was a strong character and I was pulling for her to figure out how to stand on her own two feet, and not change to become what her man wanted. I was glad to see she became I woman in charge, so to speak. It was an interesting well developed world, with colorful characters that you could easily picture, and even though their activities were less than reputable somehow you ended up rooting for them. There were plenty of twists that kept things interesting, with the biggest mystery waiting until the final pages to be sorted out. Around chapter eight I was completely floored and left wondering where the story was going next. Sateria, and Apollo were great characters, I found Johnny obnoxious, but I think that's a personal preference more than a flaw in the writing, I've never found dominating overconfidence an attractive quality, but it does lend for an interesting character. As far as I could tell no punctuation and spellings errors, which is always appreciated. An all in all great read!
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