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Entertaining dating game

"This book makes me want to be Lucy and this world. Definitely could use more descriptions of the characters so I could immerse myself further into the story. "

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Love the variety and the female MC

"I think it’s a premise that is wildly enjoyable even amidst suspension of reality. More than that though- I love that she’s trying them all out without shame, and figuring out what makes her happy. A nice modern take on mythology/gods and mortals. "

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Elysium dating game

"Any more updates about what challenges lucy has next??? Im wondering if Lucy will ever go back to the real world??? 🤔🤔🤔 love this so far extremely intriguing and gripping ❤️❤️❤️"

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A Dating Game That Understands the Heart

"What makes this dating game exceptional isn’t just its clever use of Greek mythology or its romantic charm it’s its emotional awareness. As a woman, it’s rare to encounter a game that doesn’t just include romance, but truly understands how connection, desire, vulnerability, and agency feel from the inside out. This one does and it does so beautifully."

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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ A Dazzling Debut with the Confidence of a Classic

"This dating game is an absolute irresistible blend of romance, wit, and Greek mythology that feels both timeless and daringly fresh. From the very first moments, it’s clear that this creator isn’t just playing with familiar mythological figures; they’re reimagining them with confidence, humor, and emotional intelligence. The writing sparkles. Dialogue is sharp, playful, and deeply character-driven, giving ancient gods and mythical archetypes a modern, relatable heartbeat without ever stripping them of their grandeur. Every romantic path feels intentional, layered, and rewarding, balancing flirtation with genuine emotional stakes. The mythology isn’t window dressing it’s woven seamlessly into the narrative, enriching the choices, conflicts, and chemistry at every turn. What truly sets this game apart is its voice. There’s a rare sense of assurance here: the kind that usually comes from creators far deeper into their careers. The tone is bold yet warm, clever without being smug, and emotionally aware in a way that makes every interaction feel earned. It’s the work of someone who understands both storytelling and people. This isn’t just a great dating game it’s a statement. A debut like this signals a creator with exceptional instincts, a strong narrative compass, and the kind of special talent that only comes along occasionally. If this is the beginning, the future is not just promising it’s extraordinary."

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Brilliantly creative and compelling!

"The concept and plot is genius. The characters perfectly capture a modern take on ancient mythology. It’s so clever to combine gods from various mythologies into a single story and their personalities are so perfectly fitted to original mythology. I just kept reading chapter after chapter because I couldn’t put it down! "

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Buffet of Hot Gods

"Reading some of the contest entries and this is one of my faves. I love the Bachelorette modern take on the pantheon and the diversity of includng gods from different cultures. The author's voice and dialogue is unique. She has a wild imagination and a way w/ words. I binged a lot of chapters in a row, it is a fascinating concept with good world building but it does not feel slow it feels ramping up. I think some stories jump too quickly into the s*x and I am glad we get to meet Lucy first and have some romance and intros before the spice. I don't want to spoil the plot but for those who like HEAt it gets extra spicy in chs 10, 12 and 15. Each character is very distinctive and the writing is not repetitive which i like! Keep going pls."

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I love Lucy

"This is my new fave story on this app. The modern gods are 🔥 The plot and writing are polished and beautifully composed!! Please finish the story and thanks for writing. Looking forward to reading more. 😘"

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Compelling Plot

"The writing and dialogue are well done and the plot is exciting, unique and fresh. I love the story and the characters so far! Lucy is so relatable. Can’t wait to see what happens and experience more magic + passion. The modern twist on mythology is fantastic! There are funny moments, tender moments and spice too! 💖🌶️ "

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