The Horror In The Deep. by Mia Griffith at Inkitt
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The Horror in the Deep.

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Summary

Devan Waldt has long been a fisherman, but what kind of darkness lurks in the depths? Perhaps he will discover why, fifteen years ago, his brother's body never surfed. What is waiting in the horror in the deep.

Status
Complete
Chapters
23
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One: Last Pour Before the Deep.

The clock above the bar read 22:18; its red numbers dim through the smoky, salt-heavy air. Every few seconds, it flickered, as if struggling to keep time in a place where time hardly mattered.

Devan Waldt hunched over the scratched wooden counter, a glass of dark rum cradled in his hand. He hadn’t taken a sip in a while. The ice had long since melted, leaving the drink warm and heavy... much like the night pressing in against the windows.

Outside, the harbor groaned.

Ropes creaked. Metal clanged softly. Over and over, the sounds repeated… a tired, restless chorus. The sea whispered against the hulls of the moored boats, as if sharing secrets no one wanted to hear.

It always did.

Low laughter drifted through the bar, along with the dull slap of cards hitting tables. A radio played an old song nobody really listened to anymore. The smell of fish, diesel, and stale beer clung to everything... even the walls.

Devan stared into his glass.

The surface of the rum shifted slightly, catching the dim light. For a moment, it almost looked like something moved beneath it.

He blinked.

Nothing.

It’s just a drink.

He lifted the glass and took a slow sip.

“You’re drinking it as if it owes you money.”

The voice came from his right... familiar, worn, and steady.

Devan didn’t look up right away. He already knew who it was.

“Maybe it does,” he said quietly.

A chair scraped against the floor. The old captain lowered himself beside him with a grunt, his joints complaining louder than he did. He smelled of sea wind and tobacco, the same as always.

Jonas.

Captain Jonas Morgan.

He signaled the bartender without asking. A bottle appeared, along with two glasses.

“That’s your third,” Jonas said as he poured.

“Second,” Devan corrected.

Jonas gave him a sideways look. “You always say that.”

“And you always count wrong.”

That earned a small chuckle… dry, but real.

For a while, neither of them spoke.

They didn’t need to.

The silence between them wasn’t empty. It was built over years... storms weathered, nets hauled, nights spent drifting beneath stars that felt both too close and impossibly far.

Jonas lifted his glass, took a slow drink, then set it down with care.

“You hear the forecast?” he asked.

“Rough,” Devan said.

“Rough,” Jonas agreed. “But not bad enough to keep us in.”

Devan nodded, though his eyes stayed fixed on the counter.

Something in the air felt… off.

The warmth of the bar lingered, but a chill crept along the back of his neck, threading down between his shoulder blades. His skin prickled, as if the smoke itself had teeth. Somewhere behind him, a draft slipped through... sharp with brine and the metallic hint of rain... carrying a whisper that almost formed a word.

His old scar began to itch.

Every muscle tightened, bracing against something unseen.

He glanced toward the dark window. For a second, he thought he saw a shadow move where nothing should have been.

Not wrong, exactly.

Just… heavier than it should be.

As if the weather were holding its breath.

As if the sea remembered every name in the room... and tonight, it might call one out.

Jonas leaned back slightly, stretching his shoulders. “You ever think about stopping?”

Devan finally looked at him.

“Stopping what?”

“This.” Jonas gestured vaguely to the bar, the harbor beyond the walls, and the life they both knew too well. “The sea. The boats. All of it.”

Devan let out a quiet breath through his nose.

“No.”

Jonas studied him for a moment.

“Not even once?”

“If I stop,” Devan said, “I don’t know what I am anymore. I’ve been in this life too long.”

That seemed to settle something in the old man.

He nodded slowly.

“Yeah,” he said. “I know that feeling.”

Another silence followed.

This one felt different.

Heavier.

Like something waiting to be said.

Jonas tapped his fingers against the glass, then stopped. He cleared his throat, as if testing his voice.

“Devan,” he said, more serious now.

That made Devan turn fully.

Jonas wasn’t looking at him directly. His gaze rested somewhere ahead, unfocused.

“This next run,” the captain said, “it’s my last.”

The words settled between them like a weight.

Devan frowned slightly. “You’ve said that before.”

“Not like this,” Jonas replied.

There was no humor in his voice now.

Only certainty.

“I mean it,” Jonas continued. “After this trip… I’m done. I turn sixty-nine next month.” He exhaled slowly. “I’m tired.”

He picked up his glass but didn’t drink.

“Louise has been asking for it for years,” he added, softer. “Says I’ve given enough to the sea. I think she’s right this time.”

Devan’s expression barely shifted, but something tightened behind his eyes.

“How is she?” he asked.

“Good,” Jonas said, a faint smile touching his face. “Better when I’m not out here trying to drown myself for a living.”

Devan let out a quiet huff.

“She still wants to travel?”

“Always,” Jonas said. “Talks about places like they’re just waiting for us. Beaches with no wind. Water you can see straight through. No engines. No nets.”

He shook his head.

“Can you imagine that?”

Devan glanced down at his glass again.

“Sounds like a fantasy,” he said.

Jonas laughed... this time louder.

“Exactly.”

The laughter faded.

Jonas turned to him then, really looked at him.

“You know why I’m telling you this,” he said.

Devan didn’t answer right away.

“I can guess.”

“Then say it.”

Devan met his eyes.

“You want me to take over.”

Jonas nodded once.

“Not want,” he said. “I trust you to.”

The noise of the bar seemed to dull, like the world had stepped back to listen.

Devan sat still.

“I’m not a captain,” he said.

“Not yet,” Jonas replied.

“I don’t have your experience.”

“You’ve got enough.”

“I don’t...”

“You do.”

The firmness in Jonas’s voice cut him off.

Jonas leaned closer, lowering his voice.

“Devan… I’ve seen men who think they’re ready. Loud ones. Proud ones. They break the moment the sea turns on them.”

He tapped the counter once.

“You don’t.”

Devan looked away.

“You watch the sea,” Jonas continued. “You listen to it. You don’t panic... even when it looks like a wave is about to swallow us whole.”

A pause.

“That’s what keeps a crew alive. And you make them stronger.”

Devan swallowed, his throat dry.

“You’ve got other options,” he said. “Kevin’s got more years. Peter knows the engine better than anyone.”

Jonas shook his head.

“They’re good men,” he said. “But they’re not you.”

The clock flickered again.

22:23.

Time was moving... whether they wanted it to or not.

Jonas exhaled slowly.

“Louise…” he began, then stopped, choosing his words carefully. “She always said… if we’d had a son…”

He didn’t finish the sentence.

He didn’t need to.

Devan’s grip tightened slightly around his glass.

“She thinks of you that way,” Jonas said quietly. “So do I.”

The words landed harder than anything else that night.

Devan didn’t look at him.

Didn’t trust himself to.

“You’ve been with me how long now?” Jonas asked.

“Fifteen years.”

“Fifteen,” Jonas repeated. “Longer than some men stay married.”

A faint smile tugged at his mouth.

“Long enough.”

Outside, a low horn sounded somewhere in the harbor.

Deep. Echoing.

It rolled through the walls of the bar and settled into the bones.

Devan felt it more than he heard it.

For a moment, everything seemed to go still.

“You ever get the feeling,” Devan said slowly, “that the sea’s… different some nights?”

Jonas glanced at him.

“How do you mean?”

Devan hesitated.

“It’s hard to explain.”

“Try.”

He stared at the surface of his drink again.

“Like it’s… waiting,” he said.

Jonas didn’t laugh.

Didn’t brush it off.

He just watched him.

Then, after a moment, he said, “Every old fisherman feels that at some point.”

“That’s not what I mean.”

“I know,” Jonas said quietly.

Another pause.

Then Jonas reached for the bottle and poured again.

“This trip,” he said, almost to himself. “We go out, we come back… and that’s it.”

He raised his glass slightly.

“To the last run.”

Devan hesitated.

Then lifted his own.

Their glasses clinked softly.

“To the last run,” Devan echoed.

They drank.

Outside, beyond the harbor lights, the sea stretched into darkness... silent and endless.

Far beyond where any map dared to mark.

Something shifted beneath its surface.

Back in the bar, the clock flickered again.

22:18.

Then it corrected itself.

22:24.

Devan didn’t notice.

But somewhere deep inside him... something did.

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