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XNate

"Great love story"

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Niceee

"I liked the way you express the atmosphere.. it makes the reader feel and vision it :) but I feel the story is incomplete slightly cause what happened after that? Did her family accepted him or was their conflict? Did her brother supported or argued? Other things in story was really good .. I loved it :)"

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