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Forbidden Daughter

"Overall a good story and worth reading. I loved the character of Ethan and the complexity of his situation. Did not see that little twist coming at the end and I like that - a lot. I won't say what it was because it will only ruin it for anyone reading my review. Expect the violence as you are warned by the author and lots of great sex!"

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The mafia forbidden daughter

"🥰 Great story, wonderful characters and awesome plot twists. Thanks for sharing this story with us."

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The Mafia’s Forbidden Daughter

"Ethan was well written. Strong character. "

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Good but be warned

"This was a thoroughly enjoyable short-ish story. The pacing was well done and all the characters felt nicely fleshed out. HOWEVER, be warned that this story is NOT for the faint of heart. This is lots of violence including sexual and involving minors, and the discussion of and possible scenarios involving it are a driving motivation of the plot. Otherwise, it's really good, but mind the trigger warnings!"

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