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Genevieve

"Great story. Wonderful plot.... possible for the author to create a 2nd book from this story. The ending is very open ended. "

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Great story

"Part 2 please!"

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Next book? You left us hanging

"What’s the name of the next book??? "

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Exciting

"Such a wonderful book that kept me on my toes"

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Amazing Story!

"Absolutely loved this story! Very well written and the story line was amazing!! Im looking forward to reading more of your books! Great job author, keep up the great work! ♡♡♡ "

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No part 2???

"This book was awesome..very interesting.JK Rowling style..I want a part 2 ma'am"

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Aetherion Rising

"Really really interesting.. Great storyline.. Great writing.. 👍🏻👍🏻"

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Publish worthy

"A little bit more editing ( Try proofreading backwards to catch the small amount of common errors) and I feel you should consider taking the manuscript to a publishing company. Your characters are fascinating. They have a good depth and they have interesting backgrounds. I commend you on the way your story flows and the way you handled the insights to the past."

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So Good, Hope you Write More

"I loved that you had to red to found out the mystery, it wasn't obvious at the beginning. You had a very good grasp on grammar and spelling, a few stories I have read have had quite a few errors that drove me crazy. I hope you make a sequel, you have a lot of talent."

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Amazing 😍

"This book was an excellent read. I really enjoyed the story of following Genevieve and her friends through discovering the conspiracy and working against the EFM. I really hope that you make a sequel because I want to know what's going to happen next."

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Altherion Rising

"Hoping there's a part two. Couldn't put it down!"

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Aetherion Rising

"I love book about elementals. Ready for the next book. "

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Artherion rising

"Loved the plot of the story can't wait for the next adventure for the kids maybe the next time they will get the bad guy."

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Really great

"It's a really good story and I really liked the characters !! "

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Aetherion rising good book

"I really liked this book it was good "

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Can't wait for more

"Amazing. Good mix of action, fantasy, and romance. "

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Great story!

"Loved it! Read it straight through in one sitting. It was well written and the story was interesting and the I felt connected to Genevieve."

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Interesting novel

"What I like about this book is the plot. The only problem that I see is that the novel a little to descriptive on the first chapters that make it a little boring. After the kids get all together in the school is where the novel became very interesting , I love the ending because the author leaves an open door for another novel or not? "

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Enjoying

"Enjoying however a little hard to follow at times "

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Mrs

"Good technique, keeps you wanting to pick it up as soon as you have a few minutes to spare. Keep up the good work "

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