What is your opinion?
More please?
"That was not what I was expecting, it was a lot more. Excellent job! Have you considered continuing this? I know it says complete but after that taste I'd love to read more! I'm also curious about Nevil's parents too. The twist with the glasses of water was a lovely touch as well."
That was amazing!
"That was one of the best horror stories I've ever read. i loved the twist at the end! You described everything vividly which made me feel like I watching the whole thing for myself, sending chills up my spine."
Can't describe this
"This is just amazing stuff you got there. And you have a typical beginning, reminds me of my stories, but This is just amazing! I loved how you characterized the characters, it just felt so real, especially Nevil! I just want to read more and more of this! Although it's not my favourite genre. Great job for winning in the contest and getting 3rd place, although you should have gotten first!"
Awesome Sauce
"This was not a predictable read. I pictured Nevil as this dingy tall man & I could tell things were gonna flip the more I read. The detail is great! Leaves you hanging on and wanting a chapter 2. I'm trying to figure out how the mom killed all of them & ate them in that little bit of time. Good Stuff Daylon"
I NEED MORE!!!
"I just have to know what happens next! This is better than some of the horror movies I've seen on tv. I hope the author puts out a book!! I couldn't stop reading.I need to know how this is going to end!! I need more!!"
Has a certain something
"So this one had me thinking it was a psycho kind off a thing, but turned out differently. The surprise part is a fresh take on a classic, but the confusion and speed of events has me torn and bewildered. In general I liked the distorted reality of Nevil and his mother, just as much as i enjoyed the reveal of the actual.reality"
