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Broken Halos MC #4: Neon

"Well I can say colour me surprise. This story was beautiful. Neon and Dante are absolutely lovely. The plot tackled the sad reality of the wars the LGBTQ+ communities battle daily and the abuse that happens behind closed doors, doors that should be safe. It was nice to see the whole issues with Riot and Caro's story from more points of views and I'm looking forward to reading Ink's story (and eventually the others as well) Recommended."

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I"ve been flying through these stories

"Will continue asap"

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Eine tolle, bewegende und reiche Geschichte

"Ich liebe es, wie Dante und Gabriel (Neon) ihr Leben anpacken und zurechtrücken, was nicht passt. Wie sie sich einer Vergangenheit stellen, die zu schwer wiegt und doch auch heute noch genau so oder etwas anders geschieht. Was falsch ist. Es ist falsch einen Gott für die eigenen Sünden und Machttriebe vorzuschieben, der Mensch hat nicht das Recht zu richten! Er ist dazu nicht autorisiert! Fanatiker haben schon immer Missbrauch der aller schlimmsten Sorte betrieben und ... ach was... ich rege mich auf, aber ganz ehrlich ... Karma funktioniert... ich glaube fest daran. Es gibt Gerechtigkeit, wenn auch manchmal spät, die Abrechnung erfolgt zum Schluss! Geniales Buch, schwerer Tobak ... sensationell verarbeitet, so dass es trotzdem gut zu lesen ist. Durch den immer wieder gut platzieren Humor (nicht am falschen Punkt oder übertrieben) ist die Story perfekt 💪👍 danke dass du Karma warst für James."

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Neon

"Excellent work "

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Wow

"Such an emotive story, had me in tears. As an author, your writing gift is outstanding and I have loved all the books i have read so far. Binge reading the series is so easy❤️"

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Beautiful

"This one was a little different than the first 3 stories, it was a nice change. I really enjoyed it"

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Heart touching love story.

"Twists & turns that are yummy & scary, bonds & connections that leave you crave characters like them in your life. Just like other Hallow stories this one is again a one up! Bravo "

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Excellent Writing!

"I am in love with this series. Neon and Dante’s story is a wonderful addition. "

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Broken Halos MC #4 Neon

"This was just amazing story from start to finish. Thank you, I can't wait to read a other one. "

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Broken Halos #4 Neon

"What a story ! It was an emotional ride all the way through. I loved it.❤️🏍️"

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Family

"Bee Ashcroft this series is so well written. Every book is an experience."

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Seen

"I know this is fiction but for those of us who have lived some version of this, it broke and healed💛"

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What

"A fantastic book. This author knows how to play heartstrings. Such a charming story ❤️"

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Kaz

"Bee, you have done it again. What a heartwarming tale of love, friendship, heartache and strength to endure what life has thrown at them. To overcome the pain that is placed upon them by being different. And have a happy ending. Can't wait to read book #5."

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Broken Halos MC: Neon

"As usual you never fail to deliver a very well written and edited story. I absolutely loved this dramatic, lighthearted, dark at times, erotic book. It doesn’t matter they are the same sex as the passion, love and spicy moments transcend gender. Much as I really enjoyed this, I’m still laser focused on Cyber’s story....."

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Neo

"Ich finde alle bisherigen Geschichten dieser Reihe super. Aber dieses Buch ist noch viel besser als die anderen!"

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Great addition to the series

"Another great story in this fun series "

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J'adore

"J'aime chaque histoire, chaque personne. Mais l'histoire de néon m'a vraiment touché. Vivement les prochains personnages. Ces livres méritent d'être édités. Mention spéciale pour ce tome 4"

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Growing Love

"I enjoy books that show love stories and have good endings. There are many subplots but all work together to get things right."

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Roman

"Auch dieser Roman ist sehr gut geschrieben. Spannend, fesselnd und Herzergreifend. Ich kann die Bücher / Romane nur weiterempfehlen, man muss sie gelesen haben. Danke das ich sie lesen durfte. "

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