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Great character development

"Love this story, great tension between the characters. Evolution of their relationships, all really well written, thank you for sharing your talent."

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Great characters and storytelling

"I loved the writing style. You could really understand what everyone was thinking and feeling. It felt like I was really there with them. The story was also beautiful and I Ioved that they were equal partners, not just her belonging to him. I will definitely read it again."

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Definitely deserves a second book

"it definitely deserves a book 2!!! you deserve to write it and we deserve to read it!!! loved the story!!! loved the way she was never a victim, even though she really was abducted and tortured!!! I love the way he loves her even if he got too overprotective at times, though understandably!!! loved the plot twists and how they became whole again!!! congratulations on conjuring such a beautiful story without exccesses or complaints, a plot that holds by itself!!! thank you for sharing your precious words with us 💝💝💝!!!"

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Great read

"I had so much fun writing this. I am excited to hear your feedback!"

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Eva

"The subject matter was excellent, but unfortunately, the writing style overshadowed it. That is why I dislike writing formatted like poetry—line by line. Moreover, the fact that the chapters are so short really distracts from the story. I just couldn't connect with the story..."

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