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Carnifex

"Very interesting twist on religion, heaven, and hell. It was completely unexpected and outside of the box. Other authors have much to learn from you. Looking forward to the next volume."

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carnifex

"oh my! this is certainly an unexpected plot twist! it almost has my stomach in knots from all the tension! Very well done, and my eternal appreciation to you for sharing this gem with us all! im anxiously awaiting to finish this, and yet, i hope that it does not end at the same time...love it...i would, and will, recommend it to everyone to read. i cant hardly wait for the conclusion, or next volume!"

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Very poetic

"I really enjoy this story even though it is a bit out of my comfort zone. Title - It is very interesting and it's intriguing. Cover - I do think that summarises the story. Chapters - The story overall is something that plays on humans need of knowing how the world works. And this idea of how the world started is very interesting. I am curious to see how the story will continue. I do really like your writing style, it is very poetic and something I know I wouldn't be able to pull off. And the writing style works really well with this type of story. My favourite part of this story is the times when you get to read the 'Chronicles of the universe'. Even though there are some grammatical issues I do think that this is a great story. Sometimes it seems as if though the writing perspective changes in the middle of a chapter which makes it a bit harder to read. And the chapters are a little too long for my taste, but it's not a major issue. I'm sorry that you had to wait so long for my review. Keep up the good work, Have a nice day /Emilia :)"

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Carnifex

"Captivating . "

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Carnifex

"I adore this! The story is really interesting. Here you can see the drown line between the good and evil. This drown line can be seen quite easily. Here you should read every single line with great affection. I loved this. I loved horror. I adore this genre. You can read about various religions and cultures. You can learn so much from this story. Usually, I try to read books, stories, which can teach me a lot. I loved this! The story is so much interesting and teaching."

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Must read

"Very well written, I loved the plot and was on the edge of my seat throughout. Nice work!"

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