Inkitt
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AMAZINGLY WRITTEN

"I loved both the chapters truly and I can't wait to read more content from u thank u Artemis I'm proud of youuu"

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Excellent storywriting

"The story handles the topics well and makes proper usage of punctuation. Overall, the writing style is as close to perfect as possible and is clearly properly thought-out."

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Why is this so damn good

"This novel is driven by a highly dynamic and twist-heavy plot that sustains constant engagement, offering a fast-paced and immersive reading experience. Inspired by the series which carried my childhood , MLB ,it builds upon the original concept by introducing heightened dramatic tension, stronger emotional conflicts, and more intricate narrative developments, resulting in a story that feels both familiar and distinctly more intense. "

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