What is your opinion?
Original
"A very well constructed and complex plot. It was a very interesting idea to set a countdown before disaster strikes Khea’s body, after Nakatoa’s attack on her. That certainly keeps people hooked, in order to see how things pan out. The story is intense, with all the battles included. And I loved the originality behind the characters and locations names."
Promising.
"One thing that cross from my mind, the scenes inside my head as I read those few chapters was already mind blowing. The actions—on how she described every detail deserves a 👍👍 while the plot itself have potential. Indeed a good story for adventure. I wanted to know more, especially on the climax down to the ending. "
Very interesting read!
"A very unique book, I have never read anything like this before! I'm super intrigued, can't wait to read more. The author has done a great job of building intrigue in every chapter and im definitely hooked!"
Review of Dahin Chronicles – Book One: Edin Sea
"Dahin Chronicles – Book One: Edin Sea presents a story with a clearly thoughtful foundation and an intriguing plot that builds as the chapters progress. The world has a sense of depth behind it, and you can tell there’s a larger narrative at play that’s being carefully set up. From my experience reading on Inkitt, the opening chapters are crucial for pulling readers in. While this story takes a bit more time to establish itself, the underlying ideas and direction show strong potential. As the plot begins to develop, it becomes easier to see where the story is heading and what it’s building toward. This feels like a story that will resonate most with readers who enjoy gradual world-building and a slower, more deliberate pace. There’s a solid base here, and with continued development, it has the potential to really draw readers deeper into its world. Overall, a promising start with an interesting premise that continues to unfold as you read."
Cool Story! Weird, too!
"I like it! The story is weird and a little underdeveloped but really good! 5 starsss."
Amazing! Best work so far.
"I really loved this! It's so gripping and entertaining! I can not wait for it to be finished. Keep up the good work!"
Intriguing
"Good word building and Lore..."
Review
"I enjoyed the character development and the chemistry between the main characters. The story has a good balance of emotional moments and plot progression, which kept me interested. The writing is easy to follow, and the chapters leave you wanting to know what happens next. "
