Good

"You have a nice, catching style of writing. It really grasps the reader’s attention. It is certainly one of the main reasons why I kept on reading this story. And even though fantasy is not my cup of tea, I really liked this. It is completely out of the ordinary, but yet so believable and relatable. I love how you created Storm’s character and how you build it through the story, rather than describing her at the beginning. When it comes to the technical part of the story, everything is on point so far. Overall, I have really enjoyed the story so far and I would love to read more of it."