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The Wrong Time

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Summary

Chloe and Matteo were childhood friends who grew to resent one another. But over time they discover that bitter friends can become lovers once again.

Genre
Romance
Author
JM Monet
Status
Complete
Chapters
17
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

In the dimly lit high school photography lab, where the acrid scent of developing chemicals lingered, and the faint hum of equipment filled the air, seventeen-year-old Chloe Smith burst in with her trademark energy, untouched by any shadows of life, even with a disabled little brother named Brandon at home, his antics fueling her boundless spirit. She came from a successful family. Her mom was a beautiful Italian woman and well-known event planner, and her dad was a steadfast doctor from Mississippi. She was lucky to come from such a loving home. She adjusted her camera with quick, eager hands, ready for the portrait project that paired her with Matteo Ramirez, the quiet, lanky boy who hovered on the edges of the group, his long hair partially obscuring his striking eyes and occasional side smile. He lived with his hard-working father and Abuela. His mom passed away when he was young, but his Abuela more than made up for what he would have missed from his mom.

Chloe’s vibrant personality lit up the room like a flashbulb; she was all wide grins and rapid-fire ideas punctuated by her untamed dark curls framing her understated beauty and warm skin tone. When the teacher called out the pairings, she turned to Matteo with a bright, genuine smile, her eyes sparkling with excitement. “Hey, let’s make this awesome,” she said, her voice bubbling with playful enthusiasm as she leaned in closer. “I’ve got all these wild ideas for shots that’ll really stand out, you’re gonna love it.” Her words spilled out effortlessly, making her eager to dive into collaborations without reservation.

Matteo glanced up from his camera lens, a flicker of annoyance crossing his face as he processed her relentless cheer. He was the type to keep to himself, his talents in photography honed through odd jobs that supported his family. While a trace of insecurity tugged at him from time to time, stemming from his modest background, he was mostly irritated by how her high-octane vibe seemed to overshadow everything. He held up a print of his abuela laughing in the park, a warm, genuine capture that showcased his skill, and replied with a tight edge to his voice, “Yeah, I’ve got my own ideas here. These aren’t just thrown together; they’re thoughtful, like this one.” His tone carried a subtle sarcasm, not quite matching her playfulness but revealing his growing frustration at being steamrolled by her enthusiasm.

Chloe peered at the photo, her face lighting up as she appreciated the emotion in it, a mirror to the fun moments she shared with Brandon. “That’s incredible, your abuela’s expression is so alive, just like Brandon when he’s up to his tricks,” she said, her compliment sincere and laced with a flirtatious lilt that aimed to build rapport. She stepped back with a laugh, gesturing toward their setup, her movements quick and animated as she tried to draw him into the excitement. Yet, Matteo’s irritation simmered beneath the surface; her constant barrage of ideas and energy made him feel like he was just a side player in her show, rather than a true collaborator, and he shifted uncomfortably, his earlier hints of insecurity fading into the background.

As they began working on the project, the classroom’s fluorescent glow cast unwanted shadows across their table. Chloe adjusted the lights with her usual deft enthusiasm, her laughter punctuating the air as they experimented with angles. She watched Matteo out of the corner of her eye, noting how his rolled-up sleeves revealed his work-toned arms, sparking a quiet attraction in her and making her quips livelier. “Alright, strike a pose for me, let’s see that intense photographer look,” she teased, snapping a test shot that caught his reluctant smirk, her tone a mix of flirtation and fun that kept the momentum going. But Matteo’s annoyance grew with each passing moment; her nonstop chatter and over-the-top suggestions grated on him, making him feel undervalued, though he masked it with forced participation.

He focused on framing the shots, his movements precise and deliberate, as if to assert his own control over the process. “I’ll handle this part; you stick to the lighting,” he said, his voice carrying a sharper edge than before, though he tried to keep it civil. The dynamic between them thickened the air, as Chloe, oblivious to his irritation, plunged ahead with more ideas, her optimism undeterred. “We could turn this into something epic, like a series that captures real stories,” she suggested, her eyes twinkling with that same mischievous spark, but Matteo responded with a curt nod, his mind racing with quiet resentment.

As they developed their first prints, standing side by side at the trays, the proximity forced a reluctant closeness. Chloe examined their joint effort, a candid shot of her in mid-gesture, full of motion and life, and beamed. “See? This has potential. We’re clicking already,” she said, her words wrapping her genuine interest in a layer of lighthearted banter. Matteo forced a smile, holding up the print. Still, inwardly her enthusiasm felt like an intrusion, amplifying his annoyance and leaving him to wonder whether she even noticed his contributions amid her whirlwind. The session ended with them packing up, the class door swinging shut behind them, the seeds of tension sown but not yet resolved, as the faint echo of their collaboration lingered in the air.

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