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Greeting

"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer. "

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Wow

"I would love to read the rest if I didn't think it would get ruined i would say it would be an awesome movie! Love it"

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Sumrall

"Good story"

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Enjoying this story very much.

"The author has a great gift for story telling. To be able to create the story to make a person want to keep reading is a real gift. Great job so far."

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Love it!

"This is one of the best books I’ve read on this app. I’m so hooked. "

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Very good looking forward to the sequel

"This was one of the most addictive and wonderful book that i have read. I have now read it not less than 6 times. It went beyond my expectations. Definitely a must read in my opinion. "

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best sci fi stuff I have ever gone through

"Best scifi stuff I have ever gone through. Great way of story telling and a great story indeed. I really loved the way the author framed the time travel topic and made it seem so much real. Best part of this novel for me is the way by which the author builds up suspense by narrating different incidents in different time ultimately to merge all the incidence with a reason well explained in the future. Want to thank the author for such an amazing book. Cheers"

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Amazing

"This book was simply amazing - I got hooked from the first page all the way trough. Not one page I felt I got bored. Really great book looking forward die part 2 and hopefully I will be able to pay for it cause it is definitely worth it."

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So good

"If the second book was not free I would buy it even if I am poor, the book got me hocked all the way to the finish. I hope the second one lives up to the first, I really do. The only problem that I had with the book is that it is a bit confusing to know the side characters, I would get confused because I couldn't remenber what caracter did what and when"

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The mother of all time travel sci-fi books

"This book has captivated me from the first chapter. I have been taken to an amazing journey through intrigue, politics, mystery and awesomeness. It tickles my brain to keep up with all the jumps in time and twists in the plot. You haven't lost me yet :) I think it has been a really nice excrrcise for my brain to figure out which hint will bring me closer to solving the mystery next and where to are you taking me to solve it. This has been addictive! So please update soon!"

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Extraordinary!

"I never read a novel with such a complex timeline which was a fun and thrilling read, which managed to be 100% coherent and which -after 1040 pages- left me totally frustrated over the fact that I am addicted and that this is only part one! Keep going!"

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Well Written

"I am amazed that you were able to come up with a timeline for this story. I'm sure authors have a hard enough time keeping track of a linear story. To put the amount of detail and the amount of effort into translating the timeline into a cohesive story is very impressive. I'll admit that I wasn't really a fan of the flashbacks, however that's just me. Extremely well written. Well done. There were some spelling and grammar mistakes later on however."

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FANTASTIC NOVEL 

"This is an amazing novel. It is the best in its kind...and i m seriously awaiting its second part...pls upload it real fast cause I want to read n n know wat happens next...can't contain my excitement...LOVED THE BOOK ❤"

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Displaced 1

"Great story about all the difficulties and conundrums of time travel but too complicated without notes and timelines."

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Like

"Good story"

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