What is your opinion?
A Wonderful Short Story
"I thoroughly enjoyed this delightful short story. It really has it all, happy parts, sad parts, AND a great ending! I loved the non-chronologically way you wrote the story. The little details like her approval of her purse or not really showed a masterful grasp of the finer details that make up story-telling! Well done!"
Earth Trolley
"The subject matter is one that many families are facing. The reality is relative to the individual, so that is very important to realize in this type of situation. Having experienced this in my own family, this was something can relate to. The author made me feel like I was there. Keep up the good work. Love this first chapter and am anxious to read more."
Tater722
"I love the way the author slowly reveals what's going on. She doesn't reveal too much too soon, but I just want to keep reading to see how it turns out. This is a very sweet story, and I hope it wins. We need more fantasy-type stories that are clean and well-written these days."
A Story Worthy of the Doctor
"Honestly, I wasn't sure I wanted to read this at first, but after about the second chapter I started getting into it. The timey-whimey shenanigans were a bit hard to follow, but I had to know how it all turned out! I did like the fact that as Lyn got closer to the present, the Earth Trolley cart began to degrade. It was a nice touch."
