The Mandrake Effect

tomhanner22

16 chapters read

Interesri g read with some serious twist.

"I like the plot and idea for the story. Character development is good. The only thing I would recommend is to drive the story a little faster. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story. If you like sci-fi with a mystery, then read this story! "

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