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Hot

"This was hot! Well written with great build up!"

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passionate and a bit confused

"On one side is a guy with deep attraction agains everything he ever thought about himself. On the other side a sweet guy, for whom he is perfect. Against every excuse they find a way to consummate their passion. Great story about letting themself feel. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"

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Not into it yet

"Not into it yet, i like the slowness of the coach and the wordy imagination of the narrator, pov wouldve been a nice touch"

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