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Great story

"I like the way this story is written, instead of flashbacks in the middle of a chapter the THEN and NOW chapters work really well, flashbacks can get a bit confusing within a chapter. I like the banter between the two after they get together as well, it's not all lovey dovey, they still bitch at each other which I find refreshing. All in all a great story that kept me reading. "

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