What is your opinion?
Kudos for writing such a masterpiece
"Kudos for writing such a masterpiece. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at exzordersplrwso AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks. Only 40 spots are left."
Shows potential, but requires polishing
"Like the review title suggests--I feel this story could do with a fair bit of polishing. I hope I don't come across too harshly, and none of what I say is meant as an attack on the author. I do hope, however, that what I say will be of some use to the author in the future. Firstly, the dialogue: it felt incredibly stiff. If it had simply been one character talking in that manner of the two, I would dismiss it as being nothing more than part of that character's nature. Because it was present in both of them however, I feel it was a bit wooden. Secondly, the story could do with a bit more detail: environment, description of the characters themselves, and so on. Thirdly--and this is what I noticed most--there were a fair number of times that words were omitted, and punctuation came at times when it otherwise wasn't needed (and wasn't present when it was). This made for a bit of clunky reading. Now, all criticism aside, I think the premise of the story shows potential. With some polishing and tender loving care, it would really shine."
