13 chapters read
Good so far .
"Can’t put it down!"
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20 chapters read
Fascinating
"Brilliantly fascinating storyline with equally great characters. Did find it a bit hard to keep up with all the technical details and definitely did not expect the end to be as it is but overall loved it. Thanks for a great read 👍"
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Policewoman
" It isn't often enough that a woman character can stand with strong heroic men and still appeal to the girlie girl inside of us women! This author plays the dynamics of all involved characters with no paucity of feeling, even the bad guys! Also, William and Harry can be proud to be mentioned, the writing is superior in every way that counts. I couldn't have wished for a better book, this was my Christmas gift to myself. Thank you Author for keeping the book on Inkitt. "
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19 chapters read
İt is very nice
"İt is very nice story"
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1 chapters read
SUPERB
"Just finished the story and i can tell you it's amazing. If you love tactical and military story i recommend you this. The military tactic writen on this novel is so detail and so many intense fight. But i don't like the ending,if i ever meet the writer i will only ask one question 'why you finish the story like that?'"
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19 chapters read
Adrenalin high action with perfect manoeuvres
"The understanding of gathering intel for an attack, the strategies used by military and special forces and it's execution is so point on that every defense personnel should read this. The story puts you right in the middle of these great men being Sarah, trying to wipe out the largest drug cartel and fighting to your very best. No war story or decorated action thrillers have so much content and it was absolutely nerve wracking to see each mission. I salute you for this book. "
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0 chapters read
My heart hurt when Sarah died. 😭
"Though I love your story, I was kindly expecting a “Jason Borne” ending. That she survived, found a second chance on one of those SAS guys, perhaps George. I know that’s the reality of life ends in death even the smallest wound, but we have enough pain, traumas, stresses, etc. in real life that perhaps through stories though gritty it was, there’s a happy ending. Hope your next story will be like Sidney Sheldon femme fatale with a happy ending. Thank you."
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1 chapters read
Not uplifting escapism...
"You know, I did enjoy this story because I kept hoping that something uplifting and inspiring was just around the corner. Alas, you are born, you are fucked over for a while and then you die a miserable death. I would not recommend this story to anyone that was at all depressed or unstable. Still it was well written and if you would re-write it, to pump in a little sunshine, then it could be a grate novel. P/N"
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15 chapters read
J Robinson
"To much informatibnon on SAS Good plot (waffles on a bit) I am enjoying it."
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14 chapters read
The Policewoman
"Sorry, if my knowledge is not really good enough for doing a good job of this review. I have never before done this. Just the name alone inspired me to ask for the book, and I find myself enjoying it. The first surprise was the date! I am not yet very far into it, but already quite excited. Science fiction always interests me. If I have to criticize something, then I find the technical parts rather unnecessary, but someone with more knowledge are sure to find that to be a plus. "
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