What is your opinion?
Great!
"I have read all your three poems and I like them all. Is this one actually about a vampire? I love it! (If you check my profile then you'll see that I am writing a vampire story :)) You made the scene in this poem romantic and passionate. I was kind of hoping the last sentence would be about the woman waking up as a vampire, though, lol Anyway, great job! Regards, Kei Angelus"
Powerful
"I really love poetry and I love when I come across a poem which invokes strong emotions while I am reading it. There is something sinister about this poem. It is a bit scary, it is fearful and it is immensely passionate. There is something so final in the last stanza, but even more in the last verse itself. I had to take a few minutes to let everything that I have read sink in – and that is a great thing about poetry, especially about great poetry. I love this poem and I would strongly encourage you to continue writing. Do not give up on what you are good at."
Spooky
"Nicely done, but I felt like it started a little awkward and could have been longer."
