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Servant of the Moon

"A very enthralling story line. It just keeps you captivated and wanting more. Thank you for this art"

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Servants of the Moon.

"This has so far been an intriguing saga. Unpredictive, and simply interesting. A real page turner and a tear jerker. A must read."

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Servant of the Moon

"All in all I liked this novel. The author is correct in that reading dialogue with a Scottish accent is difficult but it is not impossible. Unlike what others have stated, I do not want Del and Nyall to get together. I still hope that somehow the Moon will let Morie to come back."

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Servant of the moon

"I laughed I cried I occasionally felt like my heart was breaking. All hallmarks of a very talented author. The characters are so well written that you really get emotionally invested rather quickly. What happens when an ancient evil comes for the followers of the moon? Who will save the wolves? Can they survive? Read on. IF.........do you dare?"

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Amazing and Action packed

"Another great story from an Amazing Author"

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IF.......

"IF is a very big word and this book will lead you to the "What ifs". in spades.... 4 will start out., then the what ifs start hitting everyone. Excellent read."

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Servant of the Moon

"I loved your story and the characters in it. I felt like I was truly there with them. There are just a few punctuation problems and as I said before, when you speak of Del sometimes you said he and then she. This was a cliffhanger and I loved every minute of it. Good Luck with your writing career."

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Servant of the moon

"The evil characters in this book has the upper hand in every scenario in it! The only redeeming persons are Nyall, Del and Essie in the last quarter of the book. The Moon Goddess needs to get a fair shake in the sequel."

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