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My Name Is Not Cupcake
I loved your story. The way you show the emotions through words was really good. I even loved the cliffhangers.
You did have a few misspelled words, missing words, and punctuation misses, but that's easy to fix.
I use free Grammarly. It helped me with my punctuation mostly, but it also helped with spelling and with different word choices.
Good Luck with your writing.
A great story . I will be reading more of this writers stories.
Great drama. I felt the writers emotions as if I was there with the characters.
Well written with just a few misspelled words, but it's something easy to fix.
And, the action was terrific. I used to MMA fight and found the action to be believed.
Great job (tell me this isn't the end of your story ).
One Cold Night
Excellent read. The action was fantastic. As for the romance, I couldn't ask for anything more.
There wasn't a slow part of this story. A lot was happening but it wasn't rushed.
Into The Wilderness
Great book. I enjoyed it so much that I kept forgetting to comment.
Thank you for sharing your imagination with me. And, keeping me entertained throughout. This book was emotional, satisfying and, left me wanting more. A lot more.
Every New Year Brings New Change
I want to change this review when you have completed your work. I can honestly say I love the story line. The punctuation needs some work but it's something easy to fix, especially if it's caught early.
Great job in keeping the suspense up. I hope to read even more suspense throughout your book
Can't wait for more.
Thor, touched by thunder
This was such a well written book. I love all the facts in this story, well, the facts that scholars know. You have an amazing way to bring in your readers.
I know I will be reading this over and over again, it was just that great. I will also be recommending this story to all my friends.
Good luck, although I don't think you will need it.
I really enjoyed this story. The characters were relatable. They made you want to laugh, scream, cry, and hurt someone (mainly Layla).
You did have a lot of spelling issues, but that is something that is easily fixed. I would love to read again when it's edited.
Ride a Cowboy
I have never laughed or cried so much. I was there with Pierce and her dad when they beat the crap out of that creep. Your characters are so life like that it's hard not to see them as real. This is the true meaning of imagination.
Yes, you had some things you needed to fix, but not that many.
I love your writing. You took me on an emotional rollercoaster. With the mystery and suspense, you had me at the edge of my seat every time I turned around..
A story worth reading.
Thank you for a terrific story, can't wait for the next one.
He Healed My Heart
Great writing. No, wait! Beautiful writing. I could read your stories every day, but I promised to read others too.
Your characters seem so real as if they were someone you would know. The comedy in places is too hilarious.
I can't wait to read the next story about Lexi.
What a great story so far. I loved the characters and you made me feel as I was in Artemis's shoes.
You write beautifully. Although their were only two spelling corrections that needed fixed, I still gave you a five since I know you will fix these.
Great writing and I can't wait to read more.
When the Shadows Bite
I loved the basis of this story, the characters, the twists and turns, and the crazy. It was different but in a good way.
You do have a lot of misspelled words and punctuation errors that need to be fixed. I know I mentioned Grammarly to you. I know I mentioned how it saved me with my punctuation considering I was a comma commander.
I really hope you fix everything. I would love to read it again.
Good Luck to you in your writing career.
Out Of Light
Oh. My. Goodness. This story was amazing. The ending is something to read as well as the rest of the story. I was cheering for Cleo then I was cheering for her mate.
I sincerely hope you are writing another sequel to this story. But I would read anything of yours. You have a great writing style. Amazing imagery.
In The Shadows
You have a special way of bringing your characters to life. You feel their love, their hate, their confusion, their disgust, their emotions, and their laughter. It's something not a lot of writers know how to do. I loved your story. It made me feel so many emotions, and had me sitting on the edge of my seat.
Way to go!
Yes, you have some editing that needs to be done, but you said you needed to at the beginning of your story.
Good Luck with your writing career.
I was pleasantly surprised by this story. I was asked if I would read and I am so glad I did.
The only problems I could see were a few missing words or a mix up of his and hers. Other than that I thought this was excellent and can't wait for more.
Keep on Writing.
Blue Eyed Beast
I was on the edge of my seat through the whole story. It captured me with the characters. I was caught off guard a few times.
I loved all the twists and turns in this story. You beautifully brought out each character; their heartache, their fears, their love, and yes, their snarkiness..
There were only a few mistakes. Example: Pasted instead of past, or when they were talking about not having trust.
Now I want to read more about these characters. I want to see what became of them.
Another beautifully written story. You have magic in your words that transport the reader into the story. I feel like I'm living their life, their trails, and their fears. It's what keeps me reading a story.
I gave you all five stars, including punctuation. There are a few problems, but they are easily fixed. Grammarly is what I use and it's free.
But Great Job!
Blood Moon Luna
I really enjoyed your story. I felt as if I was with the characters, living vicariously through them.
You need a little work on your punctuation, but that can be fixed quickly. Especially if you download Grammarly for free. Sure helped me.
Good Luck with your writing and please do a sequel to this story. I would love to read about the big evil that's coming.
My Mystery Mate
Thank you again for an amazing story. I have enjoyed all of your stories and I think I have just two more to read but read I will.
I feel like I have been on a whirlwind of mystery, deceit, and action. Add Romance in there and it's a great story.
Order of Protection
I have to say that all your stories have been great, so far. I love the emotion you put in your stories. It definitely carries over to the reader.
Thanks so much for another great story.
You had me sitting on the edge of my chairs, screaming at times, and laughing at others.
The Last Shewolf
I love reading your stories. They are so full of emotions, emotions that the reader feels a part of. The action, romance, and hope you feel keeps the reader entertained throughout the whole story.
There were a couple of words, that a spell checker wouldn't catch since they weren't misspelled, but just the wrong word. Such as; feel instead of feed. I still gave this 5 stars considering it is something that can be fixed quickly.
Thanks for an entertaining read.
This is the best book I have ever read on Inkitt. It was moving, romantic, heartbreaking, and full of action and suspense.
There were only a few past and present tense problems, but it's something easy to fix. I won't rate a 4 just because of those problems.
Great job! I hope there is more. I would gladly read anything you write.
Defying The Alpha
This was a great story full of twists and turns. You never knew what was going to happen next, which kept this very interesting.
Yes, there are some misspelled words, but if you read the beginning it does tell you that there will be.
Heart of Stone - Book 1: Fighting Fate
I have read almost all of your stories in 1 1/2. I have loved each of them and can't wait to read the next one.
You are definitely one of the best storytellers I have read in a while. I have enjoyed each and every one of them.
The Forgotten Claim
I have to say this was one of the best-written stories about werewolves I have ever read.
The plot was great and the emotions you could feel in the telling of this story were as if you were with them.
I wanted to cry at times (and I don't cry), I wanted to yell at other times, and root for them the rest of the time.
The Alpha King's Daughter
I loved this story. You did an excellent job. I felt like I was there with the characters and couldn't wait to see what would happen next.
The only thing I would work on would be punctuation and spelling. Download Grammarly and look at a novel of your favorite author. It helps so much.
Good Luck with your writing and I would love to see this as a series.
The Lego Movie
I'm not a big fan of rewritten movies, but I have really enjoyed this one so far.
Yes, there are spelling and punctuation that could be better, but for the first book, you did a good job.
Don't give up, keep writing. It takes a little while to start feeling the flow.
I thought this was a great story. You just need to back and check for missing words.
There is also a few problems with past and present tenses. Other those minor problems (which can be easily fixed) this was a well-written store with a lot of twists.
Keep up the Great work and please write a sequel to compliment this story.
The Death Wolf's Call
I loved this story. It was well written and very interesting. It kept me guessing which I love.
There a few words that weren't correctly spelled in this story, but the punctuation is superb. I can't wait to read the next one.
Good luck to you in your writing, but I seriously don't think you will need it.
The Bad Boy And The Cheerleader
I liked the teenage angst that your characters go through and how you portray them.
Your punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure need a little work. You have a few places where they are words missing that should be in the sentence I know I tell this to everyone, myself included. Download Grammarly, it's free and will help with misspelled words, punctuation, and even different word choices.
I did get a little confused between American words then right after a London word.
Overall you did a remarkable job with your characters and should be proud of yourself.
The Chosen One
I enjoyed this book. I loved the plot twists and the realistic way you described teens and mates. There were a few slow chapters, but it kept getting better and better.
I loved the end of the book. Enough said I don't want to give away your story.
Keep up the great Job.
I Broke Into The Alpha's House
This story made me mad, then sad, then happy.
You have a wonderful way of telling your story, but the punctuation and spelling needed work. But this is a story I will let my friends know about.
Good Luck to you.
A great story with a lot of things going on, but in a very good way. A very well written book.
This book is different, which makes it fun to read.
You don't want to miss reading this book. If you do then you lost out on a great treasure.
Happy Writing and keep up the great job. I, for one, will be looking for new chapters. This is the best book have read so far.
The Unexpected Mate
I loved the drama and mystery in this book. Your writing skill is so good, with a few misspelled words or punctuation. There was also a chapter missing and 2 different chapters that repeated.
But, I. Loved. This. Book.
Keep on writing.
Elements: the gifted
This was a very well thought out book. I enjoyed the characters and the mystery.
It would have been five stars if not for a few misspelled words and missing words. The past and present tenses were mixed up a lot, but overall an excellent story.
I will be recommending this book to my friends to read.
Tied To Darkness
This has a great twisting plot. The writer has the very best imagination and her writing skills are superb.
There are a few typo's, a few extra words, and a few words that need to be changed, but overall this is one of the best stories I have read.
Very entertaining and the characters come to life under the writer's hand..
I have to say this is one of the best novels I have read in a long time.
It was perfectly written and the characters were spot on. I couldn't believe the interaction between each one. I laughed in some parts and wanted to cry in others.
Thank you for a GREAT novel.
I loved the plot of this story. It was unique and I thoroughly enjoyed it..
The only thing I could see was missing words in between sentences.
There were only a few grammatical errors that I could see. I would definitely love to see a sequel to this novel. I want to know what happens after. Great Job! And keep up the great writing.
Servant of the Moon
I loved your story and the characters in it. I felt like I was truly there with them. There are just a few punctuation problems and as I said before, when you speak of Del sometimes you said he and then she.
This was a cliffhanger and I loved every minute of it.
Good Luck with your writing career.
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