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powerfully sexy story

"A brilliant short story. Extremely sexy with well described sex scenes. The characters are hot and sweet. Love that you dont waste time with long descriptions. The story and cum flows freely and often. 👍🏻👏🏻😉"

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Power

"Great writing. I forgot how “In your face” this author’s work is lol and from the outset. I actually really enjoyed this short story and liked the way it finished by leading into another in the series. "

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Power-ful

"Gregory has been taken under the wing of Victor, who likes to help young men, and who also enjoys (consensual) sexual favours from them. Gregory then meets Kevin - a young man who works in the online entertainment industry after being rejected by his homophobic family - and they soon start talking about their respective pasts and futures. The plot has the hallmark undercurrent of sexual fantasy that I've come to associate with Gabriel's writing, but also carries a stark ethical message which is woven through the narrative. I won't say any more as I don't want to spoil it, except that I enjoyed it. Gabriel strikes again! "

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POWER❤️

"Gabriel Beton you have written a very powerful story, this is not just a story about smut, a story about money and sex, but a story about what those people in power do, they hurt the young, innocent, and vulnerable, in all manner of ways, and always seem to get away with it. Victor is a rich man that likes to have fun, he seeks out young men, willing to let him educated them, help them financially, and in return all he wants is to have a little sexual fun with them whenever he wants, and needs. Kevin joins Gregory and Tim as part of Daddy’s play mates, but Kevin's life will change in so many ways since joining this interesting group of men. I highly, highly recommend this book to all on Inkitt it’s a must read.❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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