Unforgettable Susan Ivory by Linda G. at Inkitt
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Unforgettable Susan Ivory

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Summary

mom & sister was so busy in their world , someone tried to defend herself but finding herself woke up taking advance to follow her heart but took someone with find out who. to complete it together. what happened, in spain , where did they go on the next chapter from hospital, airport and spain

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Susan just turned 18 years old and living with her parents. heard a sound coming outside her window as she peeked. looking downstairs to see who's moving in or out, she sees a uhaul truck. but wonders If it was even for her and her family. she quickly runs downstairs to meet the neighbor guy next door. Hi there said: Kyle, as he introduced and greeted himself. hello I am Susan greeted herself. she had this look as "she was looking at him head to toe. So you're from around here ? Kyle asked, what are you doing? she asked. Just wanted to get to know you well he said. well umm yea pretty much she said. you look pretty, he commented her , what are you doing her she asked: Susan stared at him just like anyone else would to figure them out. Well I am here moving in as you can see said: Kyle. "As she was looking around he was staring at her with interest". his relationship currently wasn't going that well. so they see Kathleen pulls up on her convertible car to pick Kyle up. see you around said Kyle, as Kathleen had a dirty look on Susan.

Kyle is a college student and Susan is a high school student.

Going back in the house

Tina the big sister going crazy trying to find her stuff but blames all on Susan. WHO TOOK MY HAIR BRUSH? Tina screamed I am in a hurry I will be late for the library. so she quickly point fingers at Susan and barged in to her room. what the hell are you in here asked Susan. I know you took my brush, why are you so mean to me Tina said. the big sister asked why must you take my things, my clothes especially, my brush? big sister asked. I take your things because maybe If mom had more time with me or takes me shopping none of this would've happened Susan said. change your clothes you look like a dirty slut said Susan to Tina. I am not little no more Ok said: Tina well you look like a Skank to me said Susan. and your going to the library yea right? asked Susan. You're calling me being mean look at yourself. said Susan to Tina. Don't call your big sister names Anabelle (Mom) said. your father is always spoiling you said mom Anabelle said to Susan.

Girls why are we fighting ? mom Anabelle asked out loud. mom I always tell you things that she does and it's like you never cared said the little sister. that's not true and you know that mom said. Oh I will be inviting the Andersons for dinner this evening mom announced.

later that evening DING DONG the doorbell rings. Anabelle greets welcome to the Andersons. so they are gathered around the table. oh what a surprise said Kyle to Susan . this is great but didn't know it would be you. Susan said. well surprise said Kyle.

so Kyle having dinner with his parent downstairs. there's a door bell again. Susan walks up to see it Larry her ex boyfriend. what are you doing here? Hello my sweetness shouted Larry. I want you back. how could you after a week of us breaking up asked Susan. you must go, your drunk said Susan. she quickly closes the door not realizing didn't lock it , turn around rushes upstairs to go to her room to take a quick shower to smell and look nicely . she heard her sister Tina age 28 making love to her boyfriend. so Larry realizing that Susan forgot to lock it he silently sneaks up taking advantage going upstairs to Susan. what are you doing here in my room said: Susan. "Let's keep this a secret, no one will know. what's his secret she thought. does it hurt" he said as he was finding his lucky way onto her Susan..

AHHH.... GET OFF OF ME LARRY, Susan yelled. Kyle heard the scream and comes to her rescue. Is everything Ok Susan , what do you want me to do Kyle asked Susan? I want you to get him and kick him out, I asked him and he won't go. Larry said (drunk) I don't have to go Larry explained to Kyle. after he kicked him out and quickly runs up stairs to give Susan a comfort hug . so brave half undressed Susan with a towel shaking and nervous. hugs Kyle and said thank you for rescuing me. he softly kisses her as she closes her eyes but then she stops and asks what are we doing? I been waiting and wanting to kiss you ever since he said. what about Kathleen Susan asked? we're through remember the day she came to pick me up Kyle asked. I went to pick me stuff up from her house. So Susan slowly kisses him and exchanges phone numbers. someone told me to watch over you Kyle said as Susan smiled at him.

Finding your Destiny....

The next few days after that kiss she wants to go to the library walking . but Kyle offers her a ride she declines it and says I appreciate the other night at dinner. Ok see you later said Kyle. where are you going she asked am going to work at the airport. During her walk she felt this heavy head ace pain as she falls to the floor. neighbors around calls the ambulance rushes her to the hospital . the only number she had was Kyle's. mom was to busy with her own business, dad told doctors call me if anything , sister cared but not enough. visited her once or twice to see her status. suddenly no calls no wake up.

Finding your Destiny......

Finally she wakes up at the hospital, from a head Injury , after being observed. doctors and nurses rushes right over she tries to escape. by the time doctors got to her room she was gone. calls a cab with a shout TAXI take me to the airport the cab disappears to as he does his normal routine.

when she gets there Kyle spotted her at the airport and asked her what are you doing here? I want to travel , no-one cares home , he then quits his job and takes care of her catching a flight to Spain as they both go.

hours later after arriving to Barcelona Spain, she takes a shower and figures she's 18 and no parents cared for her so "follow your heart". holds up a glass of wine after bathing: her first time drinking wine. Finally she's enters with Kyle face to face. your face is so perfect he said softly when they both were face to face, and beautiful he said to Susan. standing outside of a hotel balcony she asks him why did you bring me out here? to kiss you Kyle says to her. I want to stand by your side he says to Susan. I do to said Susan to Kyle. I want to be by your side forever she whispers to him softly. I'll never let you go, I love you more then anyone said: Kyle.

The Intimacy...

It doesn't hurt right? he asked Susan softly said NO... , you're mine got that? Kyle said, she smiled at him with trust and said yes I understand.

Lets enjoy the night said: Kyle












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