What is your opinion?
The Time Factory 1:The Beginning
"A great sci-fi/fantasy story. The action begins right off the bat and moves at a fantastic pace that keeps you turning page after page. Alex is a likable character as you follow him through this bizarre new world he's discovered exists. The fantasy world is well-developed and easy to get your mind around, which I really appreciate since this isn't a genre I would normally gravitate to. Five balances the action with the character development well, and pulls you in right to the very last page. Super interested to see where this story is headed next!"
Needs work
"Your story is interesting and you have the right idea. However, be careful not to list things describe your settings and characters more in order to create the right emotions and set up the scene properly. This really helps pull in readers."
