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Great

"This author has a gift for the small moment. A look, a pause, a word left unsaid. The story lives in those spaces and they are written with extraordinary precision."

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Great Plot, but room for improvement

"I really enjoy the premise of the plot line. I think that the story will develop wonderfully based on how is has thus far. I did notice the names of characters changed from the early chapters to the most recent, so that was a bit confusing. But overall, it’s a great read and I can’t wait for more chapters. "

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