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Why I Wanted to Shout "Daddy!"

"As a non-native English speaker, I may not have understood all the subtle nuances, but I was deeply moved by... What struck me most was how deeply personal the story became despite its indirect nature. The pain and yearning conveyed through the characters' acts felt incredibly real and resonated on a fundamental level. By the final lines, the sorrow had become so palpable that I felt an overwhelming urge to join in the characters' lament. The ending left me with a strong sense of loss, so much so that I, too, felt like shouting, "Daddy!!!!"😱"

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