Chapter 1 (Day 1)
**Y/n's POV**
“Mom, can we go for a short drive up the parkway?” I asked, giving her my best puppy eyes. “Sure, let’s go,” she replied as she grabbed her jacket. We walked outside and got into the car. It was nighttime.
**Time Skip**
As we drove up the parkway, I spotted something red in the grass by the road. “Mom, stop!” I exclaimed. “Why?” she asked as she applied the brakes. I opened the car door and stepped outside to investigate the creature, which resembled Bloodmoon from the Sun and Moon show. He didn’t appear to be hurt. I gently shook him awake. “Ugh, where are we, brother? Who are you, human?!” Bloodmoon said, sounding confused. “Hi, I’m Y/n. Let me help you up!” I replied as I helped him to his feet. “Thank you. We’re Bloodmoon!” he said as I dragged him into the car.
**Time Skip**
“Thank you for taking us in and letting us stay here,” Bloodmoon said. “You’re welcome, Bloody!” I exclaimed. “Bloody?” he repeated. “Do you not like the nickname?” I asked. “No, we like it very much!” he said.
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What stands out most is the contrast between the normal human setting and Bloodmoon’s sudden, mysterious presence. The discovery scene by the parkway is very visual and already feels like a perfect panel moment, with strong cinematic framing possibilities. The interaction between Y/n and Bloodmoon is also very light and natural, especially the nickname moment “Bloody,” which adds a soft emotional hook and gives their bond an instant identity.
Bloodmoon’s confused but oddly polite personality gives him charm, and Y/n’s gentle curiosity balances the tone nicely. The pacing is quick, but that actually makes it feel like a setup chapter for something bigger rather than a fully explained world.
:3
I like how the pun (intended or unintended) emerged as "You're welcome, Bloody!" sounds like "You're welcome, Buddy!"