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Thank you

"Thank you for an amazing story. I really enjoyed it. Your have a lovely writing style that painted the story in my mind of hopefully the world you were portraying Thank you again 💜"

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Torl's Journey

"I really enjoyed the story and would like to read a sequel"

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Torl's journey

"An excellent story full of action and intrigue and even mystery. Definitely a good read and I would recognize it to others."

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Difficult Decisions

"A well written story of making decisions, living with the results and moving forward. We are responsible for for choices!"

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Tarl's journey

"I love the plot and the writing style. I really wish they could be a sequel. And to see how the events here tie with Zaable from the other book."

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Torls Journey

"Keeping quiet talent like the character has is a trait very few strong characters have written into them. The author wrote a sustainable story of colonist and survivalist ethics as the balance of power goes so easily to those whose own talents aren't utilized for common good."

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OVERALL WRITING

"It was a interesting story I really loved even though I wish there was more romance between Lia and Torl otherwise everything really well and seemed so realistic especially the political parts You are an amazing writer and I look forward to more of your stories in the future"

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Torl’s journey

"Really a great story❣️Fast paced, action packed & interesting🤗Thanks dear author👏🏼👏🏼"

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Torl’s journey

"Very readable "

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Torl's Journey

"Its good its very good even Am looking forward to a part 2 if at all possible Having said that the ending was acceptable"

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Torls journey

"Great story;a few minor spelling errors"

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GOOD STORY

"Liked the way the story unfolded. I moved along with the plot and characters "

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Torl's Journey

"Great read. Lots of action to keep a reader interested. Needs a little work in spelling and punctuation. There's a couple of spots where the punctuation leaves one a little confused. Really enjoyed this book. :)"

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Torl's Journey

"This is a great story, lots of detail. I am amazed at the well thought out world, which really comes through as the story progresses. The technical aspects and the extra-sensory abilities are consistent throughout the story, which makes it believable. I want to know Torl's back story and how the situation they now find themselves in came about. Looking forward to more!"

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Wayne

"Good read enjoyed "

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Torls journey

"Great story very imaginative plot "

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Toris journey

"The intricacies and complexity of the story really amazed me. Kudos to the writer, and hope to read more from the author. Thank you for the story of love, war, politics, achievements, and more"

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