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Review
"I fell in love with the poetry within the story and the beautiful description of traffic lights cascading into the room was great. This has left me wanting to read more. Thanks."
A Great Prologue
"Hello! I really like the opening scene and the opening line. Your poetic style of writing makes me want to read more, though I'm not really into poetic poet myself. (Do you get what I mean?) The only problem I found is the missing comma or full stop in the direct sentence. You might want to correct it. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters! :) Regards, Kei Angelus"
