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Chilling

"A great story told in a very short space through an interesting narrative. I'm loving that personification! This story played with expectation from the get go. It's like looking through a blurry lens reading this, but it's intriguing. I think this works very well as a short story, and I'm thankful for that because it wouldn't work any longer or shorter than it is. The writer struck the perfect balance with this. Overall, definitely chilling. 'I love her enough to grant that solace' really spoke volumes. ((Edit: this deserves more likes than it's getting! Only 2 as I write this...))"

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