Sobreviviendo al estilo Son Goku

Mary Wilkins: This was an enjoyable short story. Well done! 😄👏🏾👏🏾

Roxx@n: It was longer, it was a really good read. I enjoyed it a lot. Wanted to see if Carlos became a great dad and he Grayson his friend out loud. He's rather closed off so a lil broader back story would be nice. And yes the wedding and twins announcement. A girl can hope right?

Farial-Jap-Girl: なんて素敵で、予想もしなかった読書体験なんでしょう! これは間違いなく、ありきたりな恋愛小説ではありません。むしろ、そうじゃないことに感謝したいくらいです。登場人物たちがとてもリアルに感じられるんです。欠点があって、複雑で、情熱的で、人間らしい「白か黒かでは割り切れない」魅力的なグレーの部分に満ちています。怒りや支配、愛、そして怒りの赤い霧に飲み込まれそうになったときに、別の道を選ぶ可能性を描いているところも、とても好きでした。でも正直、一番の驚きは、この本がとにかく楽しく読めたこと! 作者はヒロインの声を見事に描き出していて、私はすっかり別の時代、別の場所へ連れ去られたような気分になりました...

jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...

Ashley Pierce: Loved this story!! Awesome work!!

Rica: I really enjoyed this story and recommend as an afternoon read.

sheshindumia: I love everything about the book,the characters growth,interaction ,emotions and funny parts too....you are a great story teller keep up

mutondimaluleke: Amazing story, loved every bit of it. I definitely recommend

MountainchiefCabCompany: I absolutely love the story's plot line, not too much all at once, very smooth.