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The ashes between us

"Loved the plot!!!!!!"

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"I see potential in the essence of what the writing wants to convey. I like something that is emerging.. even when the author seems to be missing sensual ingredients. I sense that my perception will change. I think that what the author is really trying to express is hard compared to the nuances we understand in reality. Keep pushing, keep writing cause I sense there is way more to your writing that is coming."

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