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Lang aber toll

"Echt tolle Geschichte serh sehr lang..manchmal langatmig aber wundervoll.. was mir gefehlt hat und erst am ende kam, waren die zärtlichkeiten..aber trtotzdem echt wunderschön"

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Great story well told

"Great story. Cant wait for the next chapter"

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particularly

"what on earth has the word "particularly " ever done to you? or, did you make a bet with someone how many times you can place it?? story is ok, too many repetitions and unfinished situations, unfortunately. keep going ;) "

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