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Intrigued

"I’m really intrigued with the way this story is heading. It seems that Beaumont has always had hidden feelings for his stepsister although he had also despised her."

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Love it 😍

"Recommend this book to everyone, it’s engaging. I got hooked just by reading the blurb and the writing style is superb 🥰"

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obsessively possessive

"A vivid, reckless, deprived and unhinged story it is. The main lady is a total masterclass in dark transformation. The main guy is a sexy monster who is ready to tear down the world for his Little Bird. Their relationship is volatile with a total addiction for rough and anger fuck. The story is a perfect satisfaction for one’s depraved self. 🫦"

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CHEF'S KISS!

"I read this book in 2 days! I could not put it down! It was everything! ❤️❤️❤️❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🤤🤤🤤🤤👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽"

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Just wow but crazy

"So from the start of this story was crazy how she was raise to do what she was told and thought she was meant to be. But that was all wrong because her father didn’t love her except used her like she was a piece of meat... that is until Beaumont stepped in... yes he was ruthless, mean and an ass all at once... he was the devil 😈 but as the story goes on I realized what he was doing... he was making her to who she was meant to be and was... he made her strong yet ruthless in her own right and yes they got married and love each other at the end... and she even signed her freedom but chose to stay with him... great writing and boy the author has some crazy imagination. I almost quit reading but I push through because I’m a curious person so I stayed on reading and I wasn’t disappointed at all...Thank you 😊 "

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Great

"The story line is amazing and captivating good writing skill too"

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Unhinged

"Beaumont and, well every character, really, are absolutely unhinged. And I love it. This is a graphic book, so if someone tends to be more vanilla, or not vanilla but also not into taboo stuff - look elsewhere. I think there's a level on unhinged the reader must also have to actually enjoy this book and not hate read. "

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Damn Beaumont is hot

"Good plot, hot dominating scenes, as long as she doesn’t turn into the dominant over her brother, the book will stay good. It’s not hot for a dominant male to turn into a pussy. Im looking forward to seeing what her ex admits to her step brother and what he does about his rival. "

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This books is amazing

"I absolutely love this book! It’s keeping me in the edge of my seat! It’s written so well. "

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A very nice surprise and introduction

"This is my first story on this app and honestly, I’m surprised and really pleased with the quality. I’m a dark romance girl and this is definitely my vibe. "

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Amazing story

"I loved it"

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The monster returns

"Poor girl. Her father betrays her, her fiance cheats on her on the wedding day and her step brother ,the monster who tortured her at school and home returns to break her spirit. I hope her true spirit wins him over"

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Bien

"Chouette histoire après la fin était prévisible "

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Love

"Where is the rest of it? Its getting interesting."

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My review

"Liked the shear strength of Bouemirt but disliked how he treated her"

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Very good 👍

"Adult content is good, I want the story to move forward little "

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Very disturbing in a sexual way

"Great build up to each step of forced submission."

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Gray Daddy

"After reading the first five chapters of My Stepbrother Ruined My Wedding, I think Willow Graves has a lot to praise as a writer, but there are also a few weaknesses that keep the story from fully landing for me. The strongest part of Willow’s writing is definitely the setting and dialogue. Conversations feel sharp, emotional, and often carry the tension well. The dramatic tone is strong, and the story knows how to create explosive moments that keep you reading. My biggest issue so far is with character consistency and motivation, especially with Trinity. In the first three chapters, Trinity is introduced as independent, sarcastic, and strong-willed. In chapter one, when her father tells her to go back inside and marry her cheating fiancé, she refuses. When he says the failed marriage will hurt the merger, she basically tells him to let it burn. It’s a powerful moment because it establishes Trinity as someone who won’t bend easily and feels like her own person. That’s why chapters four and five felt contradictory. Once Beaumont arrives and Trinity ends up back at his place, a ghost of her father warns her to behave or everything will burn. Instead of pushing back like the Trinity we were introduced to, she suddenly becomes much more accepting and compliant. That shift felt abrupt and weakened the strong foundation built in the opening chapters. It made her motivations feel unclear and somewhat inconsistent. Ironically, Beaumont was the character I liked most. He seems like the character readers probably aren’t supposed to fully trust or root for, but he felt the most layered. His actions, words, and emotional reactions had clearer reasoning behind them than many of the other characters. Unfortunately, side characters like Julian, Trinity’s father, and Sarah feel underdeveloped. Julian especially feels like a missed opportunity. He’s presented as an abusive, uncaring fiancé who cheated on Trinity with Sarah, but the story also makes it clear that neither he nor Trinity actually wanted to marry each other. That raises interesting questions, why were they still engaged? Why were they trapped in that arrangement? Those answers mostly feel unexplored, at least in the first five chapters. Oddly, chapter four, through Beaumont’s point of view, gave me the clearest understanding of Trinity’s situation and why he both wants her and seems conflicted about her. That perspective added depth the earlier chapters sometimes lacked. Overall, this story has strong atmosphere, dramatic dialogue, and compelling tension, but some of the characterization feels cliché, repetitive, or emotionally underexplained. If you enjoy stories like "Cry or Better Yet Beg", this will probably appeal to you because of its intense and explosive dynamic. If not, parts of it may feel repetitive, confusing, or overly dramatic. So far: strong writing style, interesting tension, one standout male lead, but weaker character motivation and uneven consistency. Based on the first five chapters, I’m curious enough to continue, but I hope later chapters strengthen the emotional logic behind the characters’ choices."

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Tóxico

"É uma boa história, um dark romance, meio perturbador em algumas partes mas nada horrendo kkkk"

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Avoidable seriously.

"This story makes absolutely zero sense. Waste of time. "

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