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Hidden Strengths Revealed

"The story goes from cruel Court to harsh but honest Northern reaches. The characters quietly grow and develop into strong, steady, very relatable individuals. The writing style is minimalist but manages to paint clear pictures for the reader to immerse themselves in. Well done! I thoroughly enjoyed this story."

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Belle histoire mais

"C’est une très belle histoire que j’ai pris plaisir à lire du début jusqu’à la fin. L’intrigue est bien construite, l’énigme est habilement introduite et maintient l’intérêt tout au long du récit. Cependant, j’ai trouvé le langage des personnages assez limité, parfois trop direct, au point de manquer de profondeur et de subtilité. J’aurais également aimé que le suspense soit davantage développé, qu’il prenne des tournures plus inattendues et qu’il me surprenne au-delà de ce que j’aurais pu imaginer. L’histoire reste néanmoins un très beau récit, mais son traitement m’a parfois semblé un peu trop doux, là où j’aurais espéré davantage de tension, de mystère et de rebondissements. Une belle lecture, qui aurait pu être encore plus captivante avec une écriture plus nuancée et un suspense plus audacieux."

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Wow

"It's been long since I read a high quality novel online. You are a vers good writer."

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FUCKING LOVE IT 🥰

"It’s just so beautiful and beautifully written thank you for the wonderful story 🥰🥰🥰"

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Mated to the wrong alpha

"I really liked the plot and story overall! It does follow the typical werewolf storyline you see in almost every story. Rejection, second alpha becomes good mate, mystery of bloodline, hidden royal or magic blood, etc. Overall really good! One thing that was confusing was the quote of people talking. When you're writing one person talking, you dont go down a line (pushing enter to start a new line) unless it is a new person talking. This happened a few times with the same person stating a new sentence on a new line. It made a few spots in the book confusing but as long as you can follow the point its no biggie. "

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I love it

"The story was amazing but I really hoped for Ivy to get to know her father better. Overall good story"

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Totally engaged

"I love the tension lines. Who is going to snap first?."

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I’m hooked

"This story is so good!!! "

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Verstoßen vom falschen Alpha

"Ein schönes Buch, indem es weniger um Werwölfe ging, als mehr um Macht, Machtmissbrauch und was Menschen alles tun um diese zu erhalten. Interessante Figuren (besonders Nora hat mir gefallen.) und ein guter Schreibstil. Wirklich lesenswert, vielen lieben Dank für das veröffentlichen des Buches."

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Good

"It was a good story. I like the plot. Some parts of the book were a bit repetitive and slow but I understand where the author was going. I finished the whole book because I needed to find out what happened in the end."

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Mated to the Wrong Alpha

"I enjoyed the flow and detail of the story. It kept me engaged. The characters were well defined. The writer did an amazing job of conveying history and family secrets and emotions. "

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Amazingly and well written

"I love this book because it’s free and amazingly written for a self publisher on a website or app! The story is intense, and hard to put down. Ivy’s journey is empowering and I loved reading how Roman would always give her a choice and never take it away. The political plot was a nice surprising addition to the story. 5/5 "

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Mated to the wrong alpha

"Really good story. Ivy and Roman are awesome as a couple. I enjoyed the pace and the way I was kept in suspense. Thank you, I really enjoyed this book!!😊🫣🤔🙃🙂👍🏽"

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Mated tithe wrong alpha

"Amazing entertaining suspenseful enjoyed every word!"

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SUCH a good book

"I honestly couldn’t stop reading this every moment I could spare. The characters were expertly written and it was such a good storyline. The development of Ivy’s character in particular was fantastic to read. Highly recommended and I’ve bookmarked several more books by this author to read now. "

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Me ha gustado mucho, no me imaginé toda la historia tan bien explicada acerca de los acontecimientos y el drama... Felicito mucho a la autora porque estuvo muy intrigante y emocionante, sigue escribiendo que lo haces muy bien y se ve que eres muy inteligente y excelente escritora....

"Me gustó toda la novela, me mantuvo cautiva..."

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Tiens en haleine

"Intrigue, manipulation, trahison, bref ce livre me tiens en haleine depuis le début, pour ma part, si on pouvait transposer certaines leçons à notre époque et notre vie ça éviterait certaines grosses erreurs de nos dirigeants. J'adore ce livre, merci à l'auteur "

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Ivy and Roman

"The story was awesome. Characters great. Love Roman and Ivy. They found happiness. "

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Envolvente

"Werewolves, but different, a new version. I liked. Beautiful and funny. "

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Compelling Story

"Thoroughly enjoyed this book and the author’s style. Definitely a slow burn, and totally satisfying. Love the main characters as well as the secondary ones. Definitely recommend! "

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