the old island

Summary

so this book is fanfiction and its kool

Genre
Horror
Author
raven33
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

it was 1100 years ago when dinosaurs died, but there is a island where dinosaurs still live very few but still alive.

Its a very old island and that is where our story begins. Why did we come here again? said Ally, because we all want to see a Dino! said Eric, okay.

i mean even tho we want to see a Dino does not mean we can be reckless okay Eric, fine.

So what do u want to do while we are there? Maybe, um i know STAY IN THE HOUSE THE ENTIRE TIME. No we are going to have some fun.

We are going to see some dinosaurs! said Eric madly. But I want to stay in the house. said Toby, well I do want to see a cool Dino so lets do it.

Okay we are here, as they step off the jet. So how are we getting to the house? Well I don't know. That's how, as Eric points at a truck with a guy in it.

5 minutes later, okay we are at the house so lets go inside and find our rooms. Our rooms are on the 3rd floor, There is 3 floors! Wow this is awesome, as they here a big sound. What was that?

"They run outside" Wow says Eric, a.. What is that? The t-rex roars, Run says Toby. "they run to the forest" Okay I think we are good.

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