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What is your opinion?
Wonderful start...
"I really enjoyed looking into this world you have created. It is interesting and appealing. I look forward to reading more and finding out what happens. :-) Keep at it! CETurner"
An interesting fantasy.
"I like the way the author introduces you to this world. The characters are interesting, and from what I know from before hand, I'm really excited for the rest of the story."
Well Done
"I quite enjoyed the story and it covers my favourite genre. Not a criticism, but a little help when you use their names always capitalise the first letter. Perhaps a little in your first chapter a little more of the main character, what she looks like etc. just so we can imagine the image of her while reading. Wonderful story. Novy"
