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The Music Box [Revised] 🎶

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Summary

“Don’t Enter the Woods…” ~A dark narrative poem inspired by the haunting melody of “Lilium” from Elfen Lied.

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Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.7 3 reviews
Age Rating
16+

The Music Box




In a land of magic, bright and fair,

Lived a little girl without a care.

She wished to play beneath the sky,

But rain kept falling from clouds that cried.


The droplets danced from dawn till night,

Turning sunny days to shades of gray light.

She watched and waited by the pane,

Hoping the sun would return again.


Then all at once, as miracles do,

The clouds drifted off and revealed the blue.

The golden sun shone warm and bright,

Painting the world with joyful light.


The little girl cheered with great delight,

Ready to run and play in sight.

But her mother smiled and softly said,

“Do not wander too far ahead.”


“I promise,” said the girl with a grin,

Before she rushed through the doorway's end.

She skipped through fields of flowers so sweet,

With dancing trees and friends to meet.


The rabbits talked, and the sparrows sang,

While laughter through the forest rang.

The little girl twirled with happy glee,

As joyful as she could ever be.


But farther she wandered with every stride,

Following wonders far and wide.

She chased new sights she wished to see,

And forgot her promise carelessly.


At last she reached a forest deep,

Where twisted shadows seemed to creep.

The sky grew dim, the wind turned cold,

And every path looked dark and old.


Her animal friends had disappeared,

And suddenly the girl felt scared.

She searched around but could not see,

The road back home, or her family.


She called for Mother through the gloom,

Her voice echoed between the trees’ tomb.

But no reply came through the night,

Only silence and fading light.


The days went by in endless dread,

With little to drink and less to be fed.

The trees stood dead and would not speak,

No matter how often she would seek.


She ate tree bark and bugs she found,

And drank foul water from the ground.

Her cheeks grew pale, her body weak,

And tears rolled softly down her cheek.


For three long days she roamed alone,

Far from her house and safely known.

She feared her end was drawing near,

Until a melody reached her ear.


A gentle tune drifted through the shade,

Like a secret song the forest made.

The little girl followed every note,

As hope returned within her throat.


The music led her through the dark,

Toward a lonely and silent mark.

There sat a music box so small,

Waiting quietly beyond them all.


Its melody seemed warm and kind,

As if it could read her troubled mind.

Then softly, sweetly, it began,

To sing a question meant for one.


“What do you wish for, little dear?

Tell me now, for I am near.”

The girl knelt down and gave a sigh,

With weary tears within her eyes.


“I want to go home,” she softly said,

“My strength is gone, my hope has fled.

I want to see my mother once more,

And walk again through our cottage door.”


The music box played one final chime,

A haunting song beyond all time.

“So be it,” sang the voice so low,

And darkness swallowed all below.


The little girl opened her eyes at last,

And all her fear became the past.

Her mother sat beside her there,

Brushing gently through her hair.


The girl embraced her with delight,

Holding her close with all her might.

At last, she felt both safe and warm,

Sheltered from the forest storm.


Yet deep within that forest black,

Where no lost traveler journeys back,

A music box still softly played,

Hidden among the roots and shade.


Behind its glass, forever bright,

A little girl held her mother tight.

Both wore smiles that would not fade,

Trapped inside the song it played.


And there they stayed through night and day,

'As years and seasons slipped away.

For wishes granted by magic’s art,

May take far more than a wandering heart.


THE END.

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author

This is sweet and somehow disturbing... But I guess that's the point 😅

2 months
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author

A classic story of children lost in the woods with its own twist. Since you mentioned that you were inspired by Lilium, it occurred to me to listen to the song again while I was reading.

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very, very clever and a perfect frightening fantasy for all children alike.

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The Music Box [Revised] 🎶